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First attempt at Full On
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SunNata
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Posted : May 19, 2005 01:57
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Heres an updated version of the track...
It still needs a lot of work on the breaks, transitions, mastering & EQ but u get the basic picture
Lemme know what u think..
Suggestions/Criticism/Feedback and Brutal Honesty welcome !!
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=551724&T=2935 |
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Sofa Beatz
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Posted : May 19, 2005 15:23
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Neone !!
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SunNata
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Posted : May 20, 2005 06:19
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no reviews  :fedup2: |
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NikC
BeatNik
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Posted : May 21, 2005 00:14
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Hehe 
Thought i'd ease your fedupness hehe
Some nice ideas for sure, as you said alot of work particularly on kick and bass on EQ... don't worry about mastering that's not your job hehe WORK ON THE MIX
The percussion is quite good, i like your hats, some tweaking the snare would make it better IMO but that's up to you...
Some interesting sounds for sure... however the fast detuned gated lead ("wikichao" hehe) has been used alot in the past... IMO a more original driving lead would work better.
Also... Try to get some depth in the track, feels slightly 'flat' to me, doesn't feel smooth to me...
Good use of sample though hehe... personally would have preferred slightly more crisp delay.
Also, the detuned lead continues FAR too long for my liking, try to make the track constantly evolve and develope... try not to get stuck in one loop hehe
Still... good luck man... I'm sure that with more experience you will be much better hehe
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SunNata
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Posted : May 21, 2005 02:09
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Hehe
Finally some feedback 
NikC -First of all thanks for the some good tips, will try to make the snare sound better, will defi work on some new leads as my synth skills improve and hopefully the track will evolve with my skilzzz
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