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First attempt at EMP...please review...!
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psychotic_neuroscientist
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Posted : Mar 16, 2009 16:53:42
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http://rapidshare.com/files/209900165/rough_edit_final_1532009_take_2.mp3
I have been workin with FL Studio 8, Vanguard And Albino 3.
I need to know what you feel about this track.It does need a lot of mastering and good recording, but i decided to go step by step...I dont know if this is the right way...please let me know whats lacking or how i could be more creative..
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Obelizk
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Posted : Mar 16, 2009 17:19
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1st.) sounds like the drum and bass are clipping leading them to be distorted.
2nd.) it's kind of hard to make out what your bass is doing. maybe try jumping some notes in your bass line an octave or two, or just bring the whole bass line up an octave.
3rd.) i like the rhythm drum part. camelspace?
4th.) could use stronger lead parts, and stronger breaks, but the track has some really cool sounding motives and sounds pretty interesting overall.
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psychotic_neuroscientist
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Posted : Mar 17, 2009 08:30
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@Obelizk
Thanks for the creative criticism as well as the encouragement...! 
1st) what do i need to do in order to ensure that the drum and bass clipping is removed..?
2nd) I tried taking the bass to between C3 and C4, n yeah its does sound a lot more punchy now...! 
3rd) Please give me the time when the rhythm drum plays....I dont use camel space yet.
4th) I could do with some help for the lead parts (in terms of how to strenghthen them) and yeah...my breaks need serious improvement..!
Peace n respect.
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faxinadu
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Posted : Mar 22, 2009 17:17
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