Oni Katsu
Li/fe
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Posted : Dec 28, 2010 18:17:55
Hey folks, i'm soon to be done with this crap now, i'm so tired of it that i'm actually mad at it and could need proper rating from anyone
so if you care to listen please leave a comment as well, even if you just wanna say "its boring and dull, because: "
everything is appreaciated, hope you like it though
knocz
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Posted : Dec 29, 2010 20:26
I like the bassline Great work there.
I don't understand the beat (kick+bass) as 0:52 and the cutoff at 1:22. Are you trying to make the beat float around and go places? Play with eq, reverb, flangers and phasers on it, to later release it to is original state. Id also cut it up making it build up.
I'd also apply some chorus to some of your leads to space them out and make them occupy more of the track.
I also would transpose some of those leads one octave bellow (some arpegged ones) and play with the octaves, making the melodies evolve and rise.
If you are sick of it, then leave it alone. Later on, in a couple of months you will listen to it and know exactly what you want to do with it Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz
Plasmorh
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Posted : Dec 30, 2010 03:41
5.13..
ive eared the melody somewhere else...
so if u wanna be original, change it I want a spare brain.... or 2.
wiseNevil
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Posted : Dec 30, 2010 09:22
at 1:06 it starts very quite after this loud intro, try to put some noise in the entrence.
min 2 to min 4 is too repeative
4:48 - nice.
filter & breaks - I think you should play differently with the filter, I personally dont like how it fades. you can surprise and put a break and add a new sound instead of using filter.
6:40, the break is good, but it returns bad to the track, try to put the track back without fade, kick & bassline after break always works, people fly.
balance- snares & hats are too high, also the sounds that bumps at 2:16
tunes- i'd be happy to hear more sounds, i hear main 3 sounds in all the track.
Great work there.
