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Finishing a track..
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Taii
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Posted : Oct 28, 2010 11:16:55
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teatime
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Posted : Oct 28, 2010 21:16
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Mmmm, sounding cool... the start has very little top end, and sounds a little muddy. You may wanna let the percussion have a bit more high freq's else they sound dull, and that lead could mebbe do with a tiny depression in the 600hz-y area (smallll depression).
It seems you don't use bass notes on the kick... Just a suggestion, it could be quite sick if you add a bass note on the kick after 02:17, changing it from a kinda DOOF (bass moves) DOOF to more of a constant bass snake 
Sounding good dude
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teatime
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Posted : Oct 28, 2010 21:16
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Taii
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Posted : Nov 5, 2010 18:53
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Nov 6, 2010 13:54
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theres a click at 0.25 sounds odd.. like the build up at 2.00..  |
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Psybro
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Posted : Nov 6, 2010 18:27
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minus
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Posted : Nov 12, 2010 10:49
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nice one taiiko, i like some parts in it, it got decent flow, and some nice experiments, i like it, keep workz
bomba
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MeditationProfonde
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Posted : Nov 12, 2010 18:36
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Nice ! The first half part is almost perfect IMO. Very phat bass and nice sounds. I just don't like the high pitched lead at the end in my opinion it messes with this nice dark athmosphere. Keep it low freq !
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Nov 12, 2010 20:38
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I will do a complete review for you my friend:
1)Intro lead is cool but you can use some more elements there, such as more leads, fx, pad, etc..
2)Kick lacks some low end bass and its a bit low volume.
3)Bass also lacks low end and its dirty, also you can boost it up a bit.
4)You can work way more in the break @1:50, also all those leads need some more brightness.
5)@2:45 you can add some new lead or sound there to make the entrance better. Also add some samples or fx in all the track.
6)I loved the lead @4:26!
7)Break @5:43 is good but too basic.
8)I expected some more power for the ending, it gets a bit boring, perhaps its part of the style..
9)I think it doesnt ends that way right?? hehe
So there you go, I hope this is usefull to you!
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aciduss
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Posted : Nov 13, 2010 04:08
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kick n bass are too farway, bring them here, to my face!
Sounds are cool but messy, also can use much more percs 
It's nice swirly trip, do like. |
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Psydust
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Posted : Nov 13, 2010 07:07
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i tried to dance to this tune, and i couldnt...
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Taii
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Posted : Dec 8, 2010 01:32
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keep at it