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Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Apr 12, 2006 00:08
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Good kick, loved it.
0:40, I think you should improve this enterance mate, you can do much better. I would add small spaces between the bassnotes, it makes the rythm faster and more flowy.
I think that the matrix samples are overused, I wouldnt use them if I make a track.
2:47, I didnt like the melody, its like a club-trance arpeggio. Try playing with cutooff on melodies and dont stop them at once without anything like you did in 3:17.
Your stops are, dunno how to say it....Not really connected to the track. I miss some changes when the beat playing, throwing a crash or FX is not enough.
You could work more on the percussion, synth lines, stops, and more.
Good luck with it!
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