hey doood,, for 1st track evvvaa,, real nice!! ,, u have put in some time to sketch this out,lots of ingredients , good use of some percussion sounds also,,, also like you panning some elements, left right,, and u also managed to get some flow going,, jus few points to cchk,, intro , the drone atmospheric sound is too loud,, so is the weird bass kindoff sound around 4:20, before the kick comes in,, the kick n bass r pretty low, try compressor on ur bass , for fatness, also try some panning with you other sounds also, and you mix quality will improve if u get good pair of speakers. other than that, its pretty nice for 1st track!! keep upthe work
and good luck .
Mix doesn't sound bad, especially for the first track :-D
Cool percusion, you should use more effects with variatons to give more life to the tune. Ad maybe some leads, but it depends on what do you want to achieve.
Otherwise good work, keep going :-D
Nice work ,, its minamal, moves nicely some transitions could have a bit more umpf . before having a sound start or come in double the kick every now and then just befor the new leads or a effects maybe add a long reverb to your effect and then reverse it so it sound like its coming in..