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finished my first choon evah, would u give me your opinion???

Anyer
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Posted : Apr 19, 2014 05:44:30
hey guysss im new in this section, cu'z i started just recently to get immersed more into production land...

so, here it is my first track i ever ever evurrr made...and it may probably suck but i had to dare and post it around here good vibes guys!!!




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Posted : Apr 19, 2014 07:09
hey doood,, for 1st track evvvaa,, real nice!! ,, u have put in some time to sketch this out,lots of ingredients , good use of some percussion sounds also,,, also like you panning some elements, left right,, and u also managed to get some flow going,, jus few points to cchk,, intro , the drone atmospheric sound is too loud,, so is the weird bass kindoff sound around 4:20, before the kick comes in,, the kick n bass r pretty low, try compressor on ur bass , for fatness, also try some panning with you other sounds also, and you mix quality will improve if u get good pair of speakers. other than that, its pretty nice for 1st track!! keep upthe work
and good luck .
Anyer
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Posted : Apr 19, 2014 15:41
thx a lot for your feedback bro and advices bro def written in my to do list!!! ill work hard into improve it more!!!           DJ of Sourcecode
www.sourcecode.nu
A&R from Horns and Hoofs Entertainment
www.Hornsandhoofs.com
https://soundcloud.com/anyer_quantum
fraxi
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Posted : Apr 19, 2014 16:11

Mix doesn't sound bad, especially for the first track :-D
Cool percusion, you should use more effects with variatons to give more life to the tune. Ad maybe some leads, but it depends on what do you want to achieve.
Otherwise good work, keep going :-D

I wish my first track sounds like yours :-D           http://soundcloud.com/deepskypsy
Anyer
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Posted : Apr 20, 2014 00:15
Cheers Fraxi thx for the advice and the ubber good vibes man

Respect!           DJ of Sourcecode
www.sourcecode.nu
A&R from Horns and Hoofs Entertainment
www.Hornsandhoofs.com
https://soundcloud.com/anyer_quantum
RhinoCeros
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Posted : Apr 29, 2014 21:44
Nice work ,, its minamal, moves nicely some transitions could have a bit more umpf . before having a sound start or come in double the kick every now and then just befor the new leads or a effects maybe add a long reverb to your effect and then reverse it so it sound like its coming in..

Keep up the cool vibes peace and light
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