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Final mix to my track!
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LSD25
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 8, 2003 20:54
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BrainStorm
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Posted : Mar 10, 2003 11:37
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massive bassline
cool vocal at 1:35, but it doesnt comes pretty good with drums p.up there
2:07 - the synth line is amazing, but something is wrong.. maybe frequences game, or maybe it should come a bit louder.. too much low frequences, becomes a mess with the bassline sometimes
3:10 - the vocal comes too loud, i didnt expect it to come like this at the end of drums.. maybe put some p.down fx there? 
nice break synth sounds and impressive synth p.up after the break!
4.00+ i like the sounds, massive and powerful
5.00+ nice synths..
cool fx game at the end of the track
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a lot of work inside of this track
many enjoyable breaks and no repetition
some things are ok, other needs changes
the quality.. its hard to judge at lo-fi mp3 version, but by what i have heard its not very good.
best luck 
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nexus_crawler
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Posted : Mar 10, 2003 15:07
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nice track overall, just needs a little improvement on some of the production to make certain elements really stand out.. good work!
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LSD25
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Posted : Mar 10, 2003 17:27
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Thanks BrainStorm & Nexus!
I'll fix the "bad" things on the track...
p.s:
BrainStorm if you think you can help me more, try contact me by PM or mail:
super_skunk@walla.co.il
Love LSD25
畜生！！ 外道！！
俺は極悪非道！！！ |
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