hierophant3
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Posted : Feb 10, 2012 22:28:34
Hi ISRA !
I'm quite new to production and id like to get some feedback on a track I made; the parameters being musical creativity, song structuring, sounds used, EQing, the kick n bass gel, etc. etc.....Thanks in advance!
hierophant3
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Posted : Feb 11, 2012 10:08
something's wrong with the link; so i'm posting again
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jsrobinson
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Posted : Feb 12, 2012 22:55
The intro grabbed my attention, but then lost it too quick. I felt as if you showed your cards a bit too fast, taking emphasis away from the "slowdown" part of your intro and subsequently the speed back up/riser part.
The enjoyed the sound of the first verse and most of the rest of the song, just thought the bass sound could have used a bit of a change in there somewhere, like a different sound in some section.
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Posted : Feb 13, 2012 04:08
I love this fast lightpsy style, you really got something going there.
Also like that it's a bit minimal, but you should give the song more punch in the second half and the end...
Would like to hear more!
Architekt
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Posted : Feb 13, 2012 09:47
Nice production mate! And great feel and vibe in the track. A possible suggestion is to build up more to that bassline at 1:50. Perhaps you could have it come in at 2:30? It's a great melody, but gets a bit old having it loop so many times.
hierophant3
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Posted : Feb 15, 2012 11:29
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On 2012-02-12 22:55, jsrobinson wrote:
The intro grabbed my attention, but then lost it too quick. I felt as if you showed your cards a bit too fast, taking emphasis away from the "slowdown" part of your intro and subsequently the speed back up/riser part.
The enjoyed the sound of the first verse and most of the rest of the song, just thought the bass sound could have used a bit of a change in there somewhere, like a different sound in some section.
Thank you for taking the time to listen to this and providing your feedback. I guess I still have a lot to learn before getting there! But what do you think about the sounds and the EQing, I dont have good speakers....
hierophant3
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Posted : Feb 15, 2012 11:32
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On 2012-02-13 04:08, NaturensKraft wrote:
I love this fast lightpsy style, you really got something going there.
Also like that it's a bit minimal, but you should give the song more punch in the second half and the end...
Would like to hear more!
Thank you so much man! yes ill try to add some more punch to the song; still learning! ..how are the sounds coming out in your speakers? (since i dont have good speakers)
hierophant3
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Posted : Feb 15, 2012 11:33
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On 2012-02-13 09:47, Architekt wrote:
Nice production mate! And great feel and vibe in the track. A possible suggestion is to build up more to that bassline at 1:50. Perhaps you could have it come in at 2:30? It's a great melody, but gets a bit old having it loop so many times.
Anyway, great job, sounds area coming together well Thank you so much for the time n feedback man...yes id need some more interesting stuff in the song to make it more interesting...thanks a lot again!
But what do you think about the sounds and the EQing, I dont have good speakers....