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smoker
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 02:08:13
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 03:37
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The intro feels like fast House Music, kindda confusing
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Then at the drop the beat feels a bit low compared to the bass with the voice just before, this feels like a loss of energy, but you better just lower the intro because beat sounds sweat.
Interesting bassline.
Cool break @1:50 but dont really liked the beat comeback, you could grow some tension there or at least give it more flow by making it a bit more predictable. A matter of taste of course.
Last section is really grove, liked it! 
  ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive |
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smoker
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 12:37
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 14:26
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Hey man.
Yeaah got a housy vibe!, new influences ?
There are some harsh sounds at 2.49 and on. You should really eq the highs better.
I think more progression would be suitable. To get the feeling that its developing further during the track, now it sounds a bit random and its hard to find a red thread.
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B-recluse
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 15:34
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good sounds , But a bit confusing in the second part , try to flow your track a bit so its got a nice groovy vibe . take your time and work it out . maybey you find other ideas to improve your track bro . good luck and love to hear it if you are done ! you got skils bro ! |
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smoker
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 17:23
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moleqlarsuperstructure
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 17:23
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