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llama.exodus
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Posted : Nov 22, 2011 22:18:05
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Nov 23, 2011 11:08
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hey llama.exodus, you have a nice bassline there and some good noises too, i think it needs abit more of a melody or a lead, and there is a sort of hook sound you have that i think get repeted alittle too much, but please remember that im not a pro and it just my opinion dude. i think it has potentual to be a great track. |
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Nov 23, 2011 15:48
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hey man, thx for listening! good feedback, I appreciate honest opinions. I also think that hook sound becomes a bit repetitive in the second section, also kick could be louder from minute 2:20. And I agree 100% about main lead, some crazy fm melody would be nice. I'll keep that in mind when reworking this one, peace! |
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Nov 23, 2011 16:28
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yeah its going to be a good track when its finished. you should repost it when you have done some more stuff to it. prehaps with the hook you should slowly change the envelope of the notes and automate the synth so by the end of the track it sounds totaly different. just an idea. |
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