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Neural Cybernetic
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Posted : Dec 27, 2011 22:47:16
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willsanquil
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Posted : Dec 28, 2011 00:31
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nice track! the bass note changes starting at 8:46 are IMO nasty sounding and do the niceness of the track a dis-service - one or two of the notes in the scale or w/e just don't go well
Otherwise great job!
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Neural Cybernetic
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 18:29
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thx! |
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Neural Cybernetic
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Posted : Apr 9, 2012 23:04
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ArcaneInquisitor
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Posted : Apr 9, 2012 23:46
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Great groove! I especially like the beat at the very beginning, reminds me of some good old school house with a hint of psy. Kick and bass very tight, hithats bright and punchy.
My only complaint would be that at times it sounds very cluttered, particularly around the 6 minute point. There is a lot going on with all the pads and atmospherics, I like it but some parts just don't seem to jive together, it sounds washed out. Maybe filter out the mid high's (700 to 3000 hz?) just a little bit on one or two of the pads so they don't fight with each other in the mix.
Not sure if I can hear the problem with the bass at the end that willsanquil pointed out. I thought it sounded like the bass note changes one beat too early, but then I listened again and it all sounded good....so hard to say. I honestly don't think the bass at the end is a huge issue. But then again nothing wrong with striving for perfection! |
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Neural Cybernetic
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Posted : Apr 18, 2012 02:36
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Hey man, thanks a lot for your observation and I'm complete agree with your point of view. But actually I use to work in each track like a live, so this track was made always like a "live", everything, it includs the pads and other elements. Now I'm working in to fix the wrongs and bad sounds... and how you said
striving for the perfection.
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Equilizyme
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Posted : Apr 19, 2012 07:46
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Its sounding good man, but I think you need to have a more pounding kick, that thing needs to thump! but as far as overall, yeah you totally got it, just more track need to be made, each will be better than the last.  I also think your bass could be put one octave lower, but thats just my opinion, I like deep bass
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