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WAVELOGIX
Wavelogix
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Posted : Sep 12, 2004 23:28
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hello guys ,,,
i am trying to make main stream morning fullon with some melodies ...
here is the link to my latest trk --
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Streamm3u.m3u?ID=1562946&q=hi
i would feel really happy if every user in this section can give me their opinion on this trk ...
and please mention ur opinion under 2 seperate headings ...
1, power / vibe / energy levels and basic sequence of the trk [ sound patches n stuff also ]
2. mix and over all sound !
pls temme wat u guys think and how this can be improved ... !
EVERYONE PLEASE COMMENT !
RESPECT AND LOVE 2 ALL >>>
boom !
p.s . - i request moderators not the move this post to the " new tracks " section , as i feel this section is much better 4 the awnsers tht i want !
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Sektor666
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Posted : Sep 13, 2004 00:27
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first they take our jobs in fast food industry then they request not to move post and then .... aaaaaaa invasion ........
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ..... no more , please no more .....[eyes closed , finger inside mouth , sucking] mommy mommy i am good boy ......
GTN please move it as downloa(db)le version(hehe new word for UK dictionary) |
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Yoake
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Posted : Sep 13, 2004 01:27
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KINOUX
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Posted : Sep 13, 2004 02:28
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Hey not bad, definitely a morning trak haha
1. got some good power, nice morning vibe for sure, people will be smiling 
As for basic sequencing, nice and simple structure(i really like the bass line, what did u use???) could get more creative with using some nice pads and more nice patterns behind the beautiful melodies 
2. The kik & bass is good and punchy
Personally I think melodies and trebles are too soft, need more sounds sticking out.
a little bit of high frequency boost wouid be good or a bit of distortion on some melodies to get the sound more out.
Hey man your on your way
Good luck and respect |
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organicparadox
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Posted : Sep 13, 2004 04:36
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good job man;)
(yes people, i have returned)
www.organicparadox.com
In the 60's, people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal. |
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Sektor666
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Posted : Sep 13, 2004 14:14
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somehow i think you very sick,,,, definetly you cook space cookies too much
bass ... try to use waves maxbass to base frequencies and make more fat , then open little bit the cutoff of VST u use for bass (add like 10% of overall) ....
your brakes are full of lows jumps ,try to reduce low in brakes
kick can be fatter ..... try it ..EQ 150 hz , 1dB boost at minimum Q ....
now your kick and bass will make the idea that must be at sound design ...also high perccusion need to be much more volume .........
mid perccusion is too fat .... as i said you do not overdo it ....
now music
bass is dark , melodies come and go ....somehow i don't feel any musical flow ......
try to mix your track once again
think of this idea
main is melody , how do i make melody not boring and progressive thru the track ......
try to stylize your track much more .....
then it would be nice morning fullon .....
i tried to help you ................. |
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piXan
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Sep 13, 2004 21:24
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heyy i really liked it from 3:11 and on.. play on the leads is cool!!!
reminds me a bit of maskalin, sound that i realllyy like.. good job... can i ask u.. how u get that sound?? .. hehe i like it.. |
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DurbamatA
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Posted : Sep 14, 2004 07:33
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Hi man, I really like your music...you have a great style and nice sounds...
Keep it up!
bOoM |
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chemical_plasma
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Posted : Sep 14, 2004 08:16
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Nice melody , perhaps you have that to improve the bass.?!But...
you the man : )
keep working. |
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WAVELOGIX
Wavelogix
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Posted : Sep 14, 2004 11:08
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thanks a lot for all the positive vibe and energy guys ....
i will definately mix this trk once again and really respect every word all u ppl say !
so pls keep all the reviews commin ... this forum is really good 
plur 2 every1...
boom ! |
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illusions
Erebus
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Posted : Sep 14, 2004 20:53
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hey there gtn,
just listened to your track. why did you only want indians to check your track out ? now now, dont be racist - psytrance knows no boundaries
firstly, i liked your bassline a lot - couldnt really judge the quality of the sound coz of lofi streaming, but the flow is very nice, with some nice breaks. maybe have it evolve as the track goes on to keep from making it sound monotonous.
some of your melodies are very nice - maybe use a bit of distortion and chorus to make them sound more psy. but i would agree with sektor666 in giving your track more of a journey and reintroduce some melodies from the beginning later in the track, etc.. but that ofcourse is purely my opinion.
btw - the reverse kicks are too loud.
nice job otherwise ! keep up the good work, need more indian talent
boom! |
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Sektor666
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Posted : Sep 14, 2004 22:02
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also i want to add one more thing to make GTN more sure about or more self confident ...
your sound okay for release ... think of music ....
much more important |
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WAVELOGIX
Wavelogix
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Posted : Sep 15, 2004 12:44
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thanks a lot sektor 666 , u are the man (Y)...
yes man , as u put it correctly ... my sound is not tht bad after all and will sure get better with time , but i must focus more on the music , coz thts frm where the vibes come frm !!
pls let the reviews commin !!
boom ! |
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