psyraal
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Posted : May 7, 2011 00:50:42
Hi freaks, i've been for a long time re-working this tune, and as some say (and they're right) - A tune is never really finished.
So here it goes.. The update.
The Greatest Sophistication is figuring out how not to be sophisticated
greenball
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Posted : May 9, 2011 03:16
I've took a listen, 2 basic things i can tell you:
1º. You have 2 options for your intro. Either you make it more and more intense as it builds itself up and you can add tension, distortion here and there, filtering can also help you. Or.. You can cut it, make it smaller, because the way it is now bores a listener (Tooooo Long).
Nothing that can't be fixed
2º. Don't ever limit your tune's bpm so you can fit a percussion loop in it, you used one on your tune all the way to the end. You can do several things here too: Cut, slice, reverse, pitch up/down, slice some more, reverse it again, etc. Or you can use that loop alright, but, with some sort of plugin/effect/automation changing the loops way of sounding, so it doesn't sound the same sound all the way through.
Hope this helps out a bit bud.
EDIT: I like the speed that your kick and bass alone provide to the listener.
greenball
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Posted : May 9, 2011 03:17
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On 2011-05-08 21:35, kabbalisticvillage wrote:
luv it bro...sick breaks and changes
i just think some of the atmost are to overpowering killing the bass and kick
I've took a listen, 2 basic things i can tell you:
1º. You have 2 options for your intro. Either you make it more and more intense as it builds itself up and you can add tension, distortion here and there, filtering can also help you. Or.. You can cut it, make it smaller, because the way it is now bores a listener (Tooooo Long).
Nothing that can't be fixed
2º. Don't ever limit your tune's bpm so you can fit a percussion loop in it, you used one on your tune all the way to the end. You can do several things here too: Cut, slice, reverse, pitch up/down, slice some more, reverse it again, etc. Or you can use that loop alright, but, with some sort of plugin/effect/automation changing the loops way of sounding, so it doesn't sound the same sound all the way through.
Hope this helps out a bit bud.
EDIT: I like the speed that your kick and bass alone provide to the listener.
