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Erebus welcomes the sun

illusions
Erebus
Started Topics :  40
Posts :  626
Posted : Dec 18, 2005 15:52
Hey all.

Hav'nt posted anything in a long time - I've been trying my hand at all sorts of other styles, depending on what mood I'm in. Here is a track I just started - doing twilight at the moment

I'm interested to know what you guys think of the feel - and if anyone has any production tips, send them my way.

boom!

Erebus - inprogress
http://www.soundclick.com/nonameyet2

Don't bother with the rest - old stuff.
Yellow Warrior
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  898
Posted : Dec 18, 2005 17:31
Hey man Benny!

First of all, I love the basslines boss!heheheh... Thats exactly how i would like my basslines to sound. Super!
Great groove/rhythm. builds up really nicely. Percussion is solid! again, cool rhythm!
Good Lead sounds, they're nice and aggressive i think. They sit nicely with the overall pace/ feel of the track. Good work Mr.B, hopefully there will be much much more of those in the track.
Try and have a few more Psyyyyched elements playing with them (fx?, i don't know, to keep that aggressive feel going) Freak the damn dancer out once in a while!
Also more atmospsheres as a contrast to those kick ass Leads.

From the little you've posted, it looks like its going to be yet another Bomb my friend!
You must tell me when its done!

Hope i helped!

Take care man and Good Luck!

bharath

          Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet
Braindrop
Braindrop

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Posted : Dec 18, 2005 21:30
hey bro....good work....but try to add more delays and fx....and a lil more atmospheric sounds wld also be great....apart from that....very nice bassline....andthe lead...well its just my opinion....im quite sure u cld do better on them...
cheers and all the best
BOOM!
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Meta-Morphosis
IsraTrance Senior Member

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Posts :  4980
Posted : Dec 19, 2005 11:20
Hey bro , i think the track is very sophisticated....a good groovy intro and the leads really makes it feel a pinch more interesting...good percussions and liked the bassline,i am sure you can more melody into the track apart from the leads, i have heard your previous work and this one is surely different !!!

But a Good job For sure

Keep it coming !!

           “What we need is the development of the Inner Spiritual man, the unique individual, whose treasure is hidden in the symbols of our mythological tradition and in man’s unconscious psych.” - CJ Jung
illusions
Erebus
Started Topics :  40
Posts :  626
Posted : Dec 19, 2005 11:57
Thanks for reviewing that clip

Bharath: glad you liked it. because of how massive all these atmosphere vst's are, i usually only put in all the atmosphers/wooshes etc.. right at the end. but yeah, you'll definitely hear more of those scratchy leads - with my usual flavour of some nice smooth morning stabs over the top

urbanpsyspirit: i work in layers - all the fx/atmospheres etc come more towards the end, but yeah, will definitely include lots of those. need stuff to be zipping around as for the leads - hmm, i quite like them actually. anything in particular you dont like about them ?

elesdee: good to get a review from you again. thanks for the comments. got a few more melodic touches towards the middle/end of the track coming up. glad you liked what i have so far. will be hearing more from me sooner than you think

anyone else ?
Braindrop
Braindrop

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Posted : Dec 19, 2005 21:40
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urbanpsyspirit: i work in layers - all the fx/atmospheres etc come more towards the end, but yeah, will definitely include lots of those. need stuff to be zipping around as for the leads - hmm, i quite like them actually. anything in particular you dont like about them ?




well not tht its bad...maybe u cld give it more a hard/sharp edge....also maybe a flange/phase??... but yea u cld do tht towards the end of the track...cozsmetimes it doesnt go really well at the beginning of the track.. the flow and the rhythm ...really like those small peaks in the lead...kickass...its just that it sounds a lil technoish to me...but hey its ur sound.. and ur music...so keep doing wat u want to do...im sure its gonna sond great...hope to hear the full track soon!!
all the best
Boom!
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sHiVaMoOon


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Posts :  288
Posted : Dec 20, 2005 07:51
hey buddy, nice work and sound quality. very CPU must be the mk2's
throw in a few more effects, pads, bass shifts and some synth riffs. didnt like the broken lead 2 much.
all in all a good start man, looking forward to hearing the finished product.

NikC
BeatNik

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Posts :  601
Posted : Dec 21, 2005 22:11
yo Benny. The evolution is beginning !

Much tighter sounding stuff man... and some wicked rich sounds too. I've told you what I recon you need to work on, but remember it's all about knowledge and work

You're well on the way though bro!
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