shellbound
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Posted : May 5, 2012 00:28
sounds very nice, even listening on a shitty headset. digging those bass slides. agree with Kevin the 2nd half can use more/different sounds to add a bit more power or variety. though maybe it'll muddy things a bit, since right now everything is pretty crystal.
metamorphosis music
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Posted : May 5, 2012 03:34
pure sikness! this is groovy as hell dude, got me dancing ,love the rythem n melodies,very good mix as well, keep it upp
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : May 5, 2012 14:02
I tryd listen But cant keep on , Theres somthing inside your track , Coming several times , Who realy bother and
annoying my mind/Head and taking me out of your story , So i realy sorry about (Maybe this is just my ears , Dont know) .
Come at 0:32 , At 0:47 And 01:01 And so on ..
Pls take out this nagging sound , Imo this is nuisance And/So not inessential at all ,
And will be very happy listen to later But this is all up to you
Happy weekend then ..
Equilizyme
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Posted : May 5, 2012 22:01
cardinals - yes i hear the sound you are talking about, maybe it is just your ears? not sure - sounds alright to me... i will check the EQ on it maybe something is strange. but thanks for your input. i can make u a special "blank machine mix" if you want hahaha yeah i will toss one up later today should be much work enjoy your weekend too
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Equilizyme
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Posted : May 6, 2012 01:59
^edit - shouldn't be much work.
Ok here we are: Air Waves (Cardinalis Edit) 130bpm
now every one can enjoy , and we would like to hear your feedback...
klippel
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Posted : May 8, 2012 13:17
very nice groove and rubbery sound, tight mix.. good job!
but i agree with the others, storywise you are not on par with your production in this track.. yet ;-)
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel "I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons
Bipolar
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Posted : May 9, 2012 00:20
Really cool song!!!
Sound Surgeon
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Posted : May 11, 2012 11:34
The track is lovely, but if you pour some more music into it you will make it into a real bomb!
Examples :
1:15 - 3:00 : I loved the piano in the background but i was anticipating more things to come before the break. Melodies if added there will make me float in the air!
Same for after the break in the middle.
Overall, great work!
Waiting to listen the improved version of this!
Misha
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Posted : May 11, 2012 17:45
Very nice and groovy track with a cool bassline which flows nicely, the only thing you could probably work on is to add a bit more variation (melodies) on the second part after the breakdown, apart from that I enjoyed much the track.
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/dreaddean-patterns
Equilizyme
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Posted : May 11, 2012 22:10
thanks again for the feedback everyone, the project is in the hands of Optic Mind right now, when I get it back I will look into adding some new sounds!
enjoy your weekend too
