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EnpsyclopediA----invasion language (-148- )
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Invasion
Digitalist
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Posted : Apr 19, 2006 00:25
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hey there, my membername in trackname  , so wil listen your invasion!
Nice intro with bells, and the sound starting clean and go foward in story with nice synths! sometimes little empty track but nice for begin!
Here are some things what u can do in my option for refresh this track!
I didnt listened any snare maybe u didnt like to use? it wil kick more if u use it!
the used atmospheres can be more pitched or elastique!
some parts from track should be filled with more synths industrial, fx... !
btw, the samples inside i like!
anyway good for begin, work foward with it! Good Way!!
Booooomx
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dE.Tonatik
Detonatik
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Posted : Apr 20, 2006 20:51
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language is being invaded ...day by day ...more n more
hats n snareszz, leads n atmospheres
eq
synths
fx
sure sure sure
keep it comin
big BpOOM to all
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-dudi-
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 20, 2006 21:50
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nice one brother ,,,,
u hv mad dedication in you
wanna see you progress and kill it !
very nice attempt !!
bring it on !!!!
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0v3rd0s3d
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Posted : Apr 20, 2006 22:43
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rachel
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Posted : Apr 21, 2006 03:43
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cheers:
YayyYY jassi... been waiting for you to get on the scene since like 7 years now!!
.. & THaNK you ... because esp now we need more full power to keep pace with the infidels... 
NiCE start... and just keep the creativity moving...
i would suggest a little more storyline and depth....
as you keep adding lines, also keep adding oooOOmph...
sounds can't exist on their own... they shouldn't just be background, and shouldn't be isolates....they should come together in an elevating journey.... so uplift us with power.... !!!
With all that new sound engineering education going on in your head... i know the final is going to rock us all...  so keep it coming....
sendin u much love from NYC.... BooM..... !!! |
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Fragletrollet
Fragletrollet
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Posted : Apr 21, 2006 04:13
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Some nice synthlines (01:17, 2:06), but some feels very "off". Try atleast pitching them to the bassline 
Yeah, and that bassline is really boring. So sick of that sound, used in 10 000 tracks before...
Also the track seems very "static", no variations in power at all. Very floaty, not "right to the point" in a way Also, sounds like you have some weird compression/velocity settings on the bassline... its louder just after the kick, then the volume reduces abit on the two next notes? Sounds weird. Also the reverse kicks are too loud., and the mix sounds very straight, nothing exciting...
Hope you dont take this the wrong way, just sayin what I'm thinking But one thing has to be said: very good for a first track (if it is ur first)!
All the best
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Azidax
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 21, 2006 11:03
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If this is your first track,...really well dunn.There is a big potential i think.Maybe some crashes could also be very good in the track.As Gill says the kick bass is sounding a littlebit to monotone.
Hope to hear more of this,keep working the good things man !!!
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mukti777
Mukti
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Posted : Apr 22, 2006 01:24
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See, i'm having trouble believing that this is your first track....ever?! Wow, man...this is really good! I do agree that it needs more of a clamax...a bit more drama. The bass has alot of room to really jump around, and I think that would add to the tension and release that this track seems to aspire for. Very impressive, my friend!!
 "Any act, if in accordance with the Will, is an act of Magick."
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dE.Tonatik
Detonatik
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Posted : Apr 22, 2006 20:52
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inspiriation booming into my mind frm the reviews ...
guess i hv just put my mind seriously to it now..
there's loads n loads of scope for improvement and fine tuning thingszz.
thank u rachel ,dudi ,sorceress ,fragletrollet azidax ,varun n mukti and i'll try my BEST to give the sound the feel that makes us go INSANE
BpOOM
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flip girl
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Posted : Apr 22, 2006 21:31
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wow 
nice one!
if this is your first track ! thet is truly good. keep up working man ! you are on the right way.
wish you all the best and luck
flip.
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dE.Tonatik
Detonatik
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Posted : Apr 24, 2006 16:21
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Kalari
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 24, 2006 17:05
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well done man
for a first time, i am really impressed
lots of work possible, but then i guess u already know that.
rock on bro.
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Triamera
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Posted : Apr 25, 2006 00:32
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aaah Mr. J hehe
good work baba .... finally things shaping up
wicked debut tune 
good one
bom
Mr.T
Nocturnal Wizardz Recs
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vegetal
Vegetal/Peacespect
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Posted : Apr 28, 2006 21:34
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dE.Tonatik
Detonatik
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Posted : May 10, 2006 11:59
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