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dE.Tonatik
Detonatik
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 12:16
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hello friendszzzzzzz
this is something i hav been workin on lately .......its less than half complete....unmastered and quite raw ...
but it soudszz good..does it .... plz let me knw ur views on it ??
plz listen to it n post some feedback
thanxzz in advance 
http://s40.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2HDUCBCPYRKZ533B2XE0RYSLFT
boom
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Crying Orc Project
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 12:35
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impressive work for an 1st track 
all the best
keep up |
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Elad
Tsabeat/Sattel Battle
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 12:49
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S.D6 (Yakir .B.)
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 13:31
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hey Baba...
really nice track you have there but there is the Sound and the streaming issue...
the sound is really not good, try useing EQ and maby some other shaper's to make your sound sound's better,
the track sounds like it's stuck and doesnt stream, add more melodys and samples into it....
GOOOOOD Luck my friend...
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sorceress
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 15:15
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nice track bro 
its very very good for a first time...
close to 150 BPM it rocks, liked the sound sample. a few more twists and it would be sky rocketing
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DJ Pelon(Inpsyde Media)
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 15:55
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hey baba,
pretty good tune you got here.
keep on working and it will get even better.
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Kryptum
Kryptum
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 16:34
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great work there dude!nice flow and sounds
i agree with tsabeat,a bit more synths would make the track even better...
keep working on it!
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dE.Tonatik
Detonatik
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 16:42
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boom boom
thanxzzzz all of u for havin a listen to it ..
for sure m workin on it ...as u all knw its not even half done and is very rAw
@ gorump..tsabeat ..kryptum
point noted babazzzzzzzz
complete version soon ...
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Ernest - Dark Life rec.
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 19:00
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hey baba
good as a first track, nice leads i like them a lot, just maybe try to EQ all correctly and 'shape' sounds as S.D6 (Yakir .B.) said...
Add some crazy FX sounds more, atmospheres sometimes are too boring, too easy...
I think youre going right way! Make some work on it and this will be nice track bro!
Boom!
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Digressio_Traviato
Digressio Traviato
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 19:29
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00000000000000000000000 la la
this is vvvery GooD soud's
keep The boom infinity
Digressio Traviato!!!
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gill
Melorix
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 20:11
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work some more on the voicesample that you've used in the beginning
Kick and bass ... NEAT!
The sound that joins at 0:42 ... it needs something, perhaps you should try a chorus ...
The second voice sample is nice
That qruaclke is alive!!! very cool man!
Bass and kick are getting boring ... do something with them ... more reverses, roffels, ...
Nice speaking noizesynth with a phazer on it ...
You've constructed some very nice synth so far ...
stretching voice ... love it
that sound that you use in the beginning is still playing and is getting boring ...
This track needs a climax ...
Very good work on this track!
Work a little more on the eq and reeverbs and it's done 
you're heading in the good way, keep it!
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Digressio_Traviato
Digressio Traviato
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 20:16
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On 2006-04-17 19:29, Digressio_Traviato wrote:
00000000000000000000000 la la
this is vvvery GooD soud's
keep The boom infinity
Digressio Traviato!!!
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Bizzarro
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Apr 17, 2006 20:50
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nice one jassi
try to use more synthesised leads than samples!
but good for a first track hehe!!
naughty boy
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dE.Tonatik
Detonatik
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Posted : Apr 18, 2006 23:16
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@ gill
thanxzzz for the detail reviewing baba
guess just the way i needed it
boom
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