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Eletronic Surfer - Nanda
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dayon
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 8, 2003 05:48
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BrainStorm
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 8, 2003 19:13
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i couldnt access the track.. 404 not found
please post a correct link 
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dayon
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 8, 2003 20:29
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sorry about the link
try now!
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Waveman
Psionyx
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Posted : Jan 9, 2003 00:33
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I really like this track. It's not remotely "psy" and more traditional trance, but it's very dreamy and laid back - reminds me of ocean waves set to a beat Imagine if Slowdive did a trance track, you might end up with this. Great music to sit back and zone out to...
My criticisms: There are a couple of places where the delayed synth is out of rhythm, the intro is waaay to long and too quiet (i.e. the first 40-50 seconds), and the mix in general could probably be a bit louder. Other than that, production is good.
Could you *please* also replace this mp3 file with a 128kbps version. The 320kbps version is too large to download especially considering how slow the server is. It took me three hours to download on a T1 connection! If you want more comments on the track, doing this is a must...
Keep it up man, this is great stuff.
-tim
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"We make you feel strange." |
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dayon
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 9, 2003 09:45
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hey waveman, lets start!
first... really isn´t psy... is like a progressive i think.. maybe with euro influences... and my idea is a ocean vibe.. look the name of project and you can this too...
i like of your critics... the intro is big... true.. but i made it intencionaly... because i think on a 12´ track for release on vinil... only this track on side... can understand? but i go think on make some changes on intro... about the delay of synth... is a problem because ins´t a midi sequence but a wav sampler (from sasha) im trying to make better...
about the louder... i dont make any masterization on this track... i need know how to make this... im looking in some tutorials to understand the "marstering art".
about the mp3 i go make with 128 kbps too... maybe i can put 2 options to download... is better...
thats it... thanks for download and to post your comment... im very happy with yours compliments!
im working in next track... now using logic 5.10... (but i keep using reason 2.0) |
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BrainStorm
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 9, 2003 19:10
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hey finally i downloaded and listened to it.. well here're a few things:
1) the intro part is definitely too silent
2) cool bass line!!! especially after the middle break
3) very nice synthesizers work, though a bit repetitive sometimes
4) percussion should be louder and maybe might contain "between" kicks open hihat.. but dunno, it all depends on how it will sound after.. one must try and hear
5) if you managed to make those cool relayed echoes, so why not try to do the same with this synthesizer but differently sequenced? I mean the same pattern through all the track is kinda boring, u know.. :/
6) I liked it overall.. nice relaxive feelings, not too psychedelic but yet melodic, dreamy and a bit trippy
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dayon
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 10, 2003 05:30
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brainstorm...
you are right.. i like of your and waveman critics... very construtive.. all i can say is im very dedicated to make better... i change my software.. now i have more control of all...
about the synth sequence... its real.. very repetitive, i forget of change the sequences... go try make this on next track... this in only the first.. is more a test... in the next maybe i can make better...
thanks for all dudes...
(sorry my english... i speak very bad)
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carlos
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 17, 2003 04:10
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Hi Dayon..
Hey brow..
cool track.. excellent job.. continuous this great work !
good wavessss !
"...lucy in the sky..." |
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