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wiseNevil
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Posted : Mar 5, 2011 21:08:44
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knocz
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 18:26
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Nice one!
I think the closed hats in the beginning are very unnoticeable, a little more here would be nice.
I don't like the bass line at 4.11, I think it's too happy in comparisant to the rest of the track.. Would you consider transposing that section to a diminished scale?
At 6:54 when it all comes together the kick is also unnoticeable.. Probably that glitch fm synth is a little too loud, stealing the freq and the power from the kick.. has this been tested in a large PA system?
At 8:07 instead of a melodic minor, would you consider going into a harmonic minor, raising the seventh? I just love the dark feeling of that raised 7th 
I really like your tunes bros! Keep it up
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wiseNevil
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 20:17
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heya Knocz,
Thanks for noticing the details (:
about the closed hat at the beging, you mean the hats that sits on the kick? we actually thought they were a bit loud.. you can hear that at 1:12 the volume of the closed hat is much higher.. it was on purpose, but we'll check that again
about minute 4:11, if you recognize, the ochestral kinda intro is taken from something.. (: we actually wanted, in the middle of the track to break the atmosphere, from sopmething darkish to something happier so we changed to majoric scale
to be honest, its not something that we plan in advance.. when we produce our tracks we just flow with whatever comes to our minds, and we find the part between 4:11-4:41 kinda funny isnt it?
at 6:54 might be the way we master the tracks, i think we pushed up gain too much
i think that pushing up freqencies of the kick at 2-4k might do
at the low end, i'm not quite sure, because when we checked with PAZ analyzer, nothing's going on below 125Hz, we always try to keep the low end as clean as possible for the kick and bassline, without damaging the rest of the istruments
at 8:07, we'll consider what you say
personally, and you can hear it in many of our tracks, we use a lot diminshed and harmonic minor scales, sounds great (:
Thanks alot, we really appreciate this kind of comments
Take Care!!!
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Flubber
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 20:31
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Art Of Existence
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Posted : Mar 7, 2011 01:07
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haha made me laugh! Very nice production! Fun and entertaining!
The only thing that bothers me is there is not so much room for any dancing! =) I mean.. half the track is either intro, breaks or to psycho to dance to! But thats your style and I now many people will love this genre. You have totally your own style! Respect!
GJ And keep em coming!
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Hotep
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Posted : Mar 7, 2011 21:04
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