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MonasticSquid
MonasticSquid
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Posted : Jul 4, 2002 06:21
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MonasticSquid
MonasticSquid
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Posted : Jul 5, 2002 22:07
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..sorry... upload/format hassles... should be there now..!
he he (quicker to write the track than to post the thing..!! ;-)
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MonasticSquid
MonasticSquid
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Posted : Jul 9, 2002 06:40
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Kaz
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Posted : Jul 9, 2002 11:16
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Needs a lot of soundwork. I like the breakbeat with the filter in the beginning. Very good buildup concept (even though it's been done).. some very good psychedelic elements... but this track lacks a point where everything just "comes together".
Some nifty passages, but there's a lot of feeling that you didn't perfect everything. This track is basically missing all of the small tweaks and changes, but when looking at the big picture, this is a good full-on track.
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MonasticSquid
MonasticSquid
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Posted : Jul 9, 2002 19:56
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tom anteater
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Posted : Jul 9, 2002 20:52
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mr squid,
individually the parts are good (on the whole), however as kaz says, it is somehow a bit 'scattered' and doesn't quite hang together. in addition i would say you don't appear to have made up your mind entirely what style you wanted to write, since the feel of the tune keeps changing 
though its pretty impressive stuff man, keep it up
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MonasticSquid
MonasticSquid
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Posted : Jul 10, 2002 01:31
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mr anteater...
........"you don't appear to have made up your mind entirely what style you wanted to write, since the feel of the tune keeps changing "
..yeah I know what you mean...it does change feel quite a lot... Im a bearfoot, outdoor, mudstomping kinda guy so... I tried to make a tune for the 'outdoor, on acid, in the woods' - kinda thing..!... thanx for the F/B..
boom
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PsyTom
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Posted : Jul 11, 2002 04:37
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I second Tom's and Kas' opinions; Further sound work should be done and there's too many pathes scatterd in the track, BUT, I really like it, and personally, I think you're on the right way.
Keep on
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MonasticSquid
MonasticSquid
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Posted : Jul 11, 2002 08:46
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drumatrix
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Posted : Jul 13, 2002 05:00
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hey over and above its a too good job for my pal with his first track.......still lots of improvements to come in the future.....i will term it as a "Full-too Fatang" track as we in bombay say it for kewl.
Hari Om
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