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E-Scape -Sidereal 140 bpm
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e-scape
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Posted : Jan 16, 2012 21:59:16
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FGK108
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Posted : Jan 16, 2012 23:02
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Yea This takes me on a nice journey! |
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ierofante
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Posted : Jan 17, 2012 20:20
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I don't really like the melody in the intro, the one made with long supersaws, both for the notes and for the modulation; they end up in being static and boring.
As soon as the track begins, everything seems fine though. But, at about 1:40, some of the same "not so good" melodies come over again (by the way that is only my opinion).
Also, the bass changing note is not effective, making the track loose its drive; one of the notes is too low and it kind of weakens it, as we all know happens when going too low with bassnotes.
I like very much the last part (about 4:00), exception made for the already mentioned issues. You have achieved a decent sound quality, now is time for you to focus more on composition and melodies.
Keep on with the good work, mate.
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e-scape
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Posted : Jan 18, 2012 01:34
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I see your point and you are right...I made this track in three days and i haven't had the time for details.But,anyways,this is a comment I really like,because it's a critique...Tnx man! |
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ierofante
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Posted : Jan 18, 2012 11:04
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You are welcome, mate. I really try to give my best while commenting other people's tracks.
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