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E-Scape - Liquesce 135 bpm,progpsy
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e-scape
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Posted : Oct 20, 2011 17:06:00
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aje
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Posted : Oct 20, 2011 18:13
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First of all, I always like the style of your tracks. Melodic prog-psy that walks on the fine line to cheese, yet it never crosses it. Nice!
That being said, I think this track has a lot of potential. I love the lead synth, I like the chord changes, particularly in the part starting at 2:09 when the wailing woman comes in. Those twenty 20 seconds give me goosebumps.
However, herein lies the tracks biggest problem IMHO: The best part is after two minutes and afterwards the track lacks a highlight. Its nice and it progresses, but its missing a "WoW" element, like the first time the chord changes appear at 2:09.
Other than that, all the single elements sound good, but IMHO the mix needs air to breathe. It is really stuffy and a lot seems to be coming down the middle. Maybe also cut some of the mud frequencies.
Anyways, I really like that track, you could making something really great out of it!
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e-scape
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 21, 2011 16:54
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Hey man,your comments are helpful as always...I ll work on that 'wow' effect... |
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