e-scape
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Posted : May 9, 2011 17:37:01
Hey guys and girls I almost finished with this track and I want your opinion on it,be honest Hope it s not cheesy for your taste...
jeeboomba
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Posted : May 9, 2011 18:26
ah well.. this is cheesy for my taste.. good guess there but that thing aside, i like the work on perc.. bass is neat too..
peace re-arrange what you thought was real
e-scape
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Posted : May 9, 2011 18:34
I m always on the tine line between cheesy poofs and serious stuff, guess I went bit over the top with this one Thanks joeboomba...
Obelizk
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Posted : May 9, 2011 18:41
The bass/kick groove is cool. I just feel like it needs more movement, and change as the song progresses. Like after the pad section, it comes back to the same groove. Some buildups and/or breaks would be nice too. In that section after the pad section, you could change up the bass groove and add some portamento slides and more synth stabs/fx stabs. You could minimalize it more, and just work with those a bit. I didn't find it cheesy except the riff at the end before the fadeout Keep it up man. Potential here.
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e-scape
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Posted : May 9, 2011 20:56
Thanks for the response man,I ll try to bring more dynamic into the track and to make it more interesting,as I said it s not finished...I realized that cheese is a matter of taste but it would be great to have cheesometer Cheers
aciduss
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Posted : May 9, 2011 23:00
Very nice work dude! Keep it up!
I find no cheese, some used sounds but well fit. Nice percussion work and structure. I enjoyed.
cheers.
e-scape
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Posted : May 10, 2011 01:14
I almost finished with this track and I want your opinion on it,be honest 
but that thing aside, i like the work on perc.. bass is neat too..
cheers.