psyviz
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Posted : Aug 12, 2010 14:08:52
Hi Guyś and Girls party ppl and anyone i forgot Here is my latest song i think its a bit crazy so i would love some feed back
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Posted : Aug 13, 2010 01:20
This is a good crazy psytrance track. The sound texture of the track stays sorta the same through out, which makes it kind of boring to listen too. THOUGH, that may not matter, if this was played at volume @ a festival or party, I'm pretty sure you'd blow some heads up, and make some asses bounce up in down in the air.
psyviz
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Posted : Aug 13, 2010 20:43
Hi Sound Raven thanks for your feedback really made my day I know exactly what you mean about sectioned themes and making more of a story.. well regarding themes i would love it if you could maybe correct me, clear something up?? The song needs different parts "THEMES" that are different to other themes but have some sort of resemblance to other parts "themes" of the song so that they tell more of a story? I have to ask as well if the themes can be completely different to each other or will that change the main theme to much??
Well thanks for listening....
Kind regards Ant
Taii
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Posted : Aug 13, 2010 22:18
Nice track Especially i like the middle part, from 2:50, that bass + synths, very hypnotic to me http://soundcloud.com/taii
psyviz
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Posted : Aug 14, 2010 13:27
Thanks Taii the bass does seem to stick a little to the ears and i am happy you like it.. Frost Raven refers to telling more of a story by using sound.. could you perhaps explain how i can archive this... Please dont just say beginning middle end chourus.. i am looking for a idea for the "concept" EG: explanation how much can i vary the sounds? can i have a simple lead build up to another lead that changes completly or should the leads be similar but have more variation i find this topic hard to discus and i will be honest if i can get this right i will be on the right road to telling stories with my music which i would love to do. anyhoo any advice is welcome
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psyviz
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Posted : Aug 14, 2010 16:17
Thanks dj chichke,, I do have a little disadv<antage to getting the low end out thats due to my poor speakers,, I can up the bas low end but i dont get to hear the final result to well.... But hopefully soon i can get a decent pair of monitors as for leads i think i can add some distortion thanks again....
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psyviz
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Posted : Aug 14, 2010 19:24
Once again dj chichke thanks for pointing out that its my kick thats missing the low end i am going to give it some power I am learning bit by bit..
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Posted : Aug 19, 2010 13:35
Just EQ the bass and kick. More whoomph without ruining the sound you have going. I really dig the bouncy bassline and the leads are cool, but I gotta agree a little more overdrive and loudness on them (not too much though) would be fantastic.
That grinding metal sound, the one that kinds sounds like a mechanical turkey? Maybe you should do something with that.. I'm not sure what exactly. But something anyway.
I don't have any complaints about the song structure, I think if you fix the production problems, that it will really improve the feeling of the track.
I think its a really good track, very danceable if you fix your lowend problems
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Posted : Aug 19, 2010 14:56
hey mate.. good flow but need more energy and make a better mastering, everything is loudless, great cutoff fading, make more breaks and thats some tips from me.. )
all in all keep it working..!! ) cheers and check some of my posts..
psyviz
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Posted : Aug 19, 2010 17:05
Bosque Sub Zinho and Xybre Thank you for your comments and your sweet help I will do some things to the track eventualy so i no i need to add a bit of
1 distortion to the leads and make them a little louder
2 Add low frequencies to kick
3 Do better mastering work
4 Solve production problems
OK
Bosque Sub Zinho my new song has some more breaks
Guys i made a new song and implemented some of your help into the track its called WAALC witch stands for "We are all a little crazy" and i got most of the inspiration from you guys i really hope you like it and sounds good on your sound systems maybe make the feet move a little too ok i will post a link when i give it a little mastering beating...NOTE i have never beat the master see you all in a little bit
psyviz
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Posted : Aug 19, 2010 23:17
Hi guys here is the link to my new song.. I really tried hard to implement your tips into this track,, So have a listen and let me know what you think
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Posted : Aug 22, 2010 23:49
only if i wasnt a huge fan of toi doi, i would have missed it, but sadly for u , i am, get some orignal works going bro! remove and no in future, be well, rest sounds sound decent even!nice mixing with the toibassmix even,
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Posted : Aug 27, 2010 04:13
I think you could give it a highpass, because the hats are just to high pitched.. If I had to listen to this in a party I'd become somewhat annoyed with that.
Here is my latest song i think its a bit crazy so i would love some feed back
