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dreamy sunshine trance 143bpm demo
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Oliveira
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 4, 2012 01:54:55
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Xsze
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Posted : Feb 4, 2012 02:58
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Love that choir pad, but it's same all the time (before 1:23) in my opinion after that break at 0:40 little side chain probable do the job and add some groovy feel( just little, not to obvious) and movement 
Lead at 1:50 didn't fit that well....and the rest is ruined for me, but sounds good if you listen at 2:04, maybe try introducing better to fit to whole story and vibe
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Grevinsky
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Feb 4, 2012 12:49
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Heavy n rolling base. i like that .
I agree with xcze that the lead is abit strange, kind of unpredictable. And can be good to have some predictability so you know what to follow when you dance. it sounds like its deeply lowpassed in the introduction of it also.
Perhaps the lead should be introduced after the break at 1:36.
Otherwise i think its kind of cool. Keep on working on it!
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