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Posted : Feb 13, 2014 21:05:14
Let's do this! Here's my take on a 5-year old Freak Show's track. Any feedback greatly appreciated. Be frank and harsh - I want to learn as much as I can. Thanks!
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Posted : Feb 16, 2014 07:11
it feels a bit weird cause im not used to psy without weird noizes.. i feel you could lay down more layers with the melody.. flow wise id say it going smooth.. nice rolls.. breaks are cool too.. but for my ears and head a bit boring right now.. i would try out some ups downs,, and swooshes,, etc.. like u knw carry the melody... frankly a taste thing.. can u share link to original? cheers..
re-arrange what you thought was real
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Posted : Feb 17, 2014 19:48
Thanks for the feedback. Yup, I'm not very creative on the sound design thing, psychedelic noises and stuff. Will definitely have to work on that!
And about the original, there's only one melody taken from it, so it's not even a proper remix Here it is:
i feel you could lay down more layers with the melody.. flow wise id say it going smooth.. nice rolls.. breaks are cool too.. but for my ears and head a bit boring right now.. i would try out some ups downs,, and swooshes,, etc.. like u knw carry the melody... frankly a taste thing.. can u share link to original? cheers..
Here it is: