llama.exodus
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Posted : Dec 18, 2011 15:58:33
sunday morning track. Feedback is always appreciated =)
peace!
Equilizyme
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Posted : Dec 18, 2011 20:35
Hey llama, sounds like the start to a nice track! I would maybe consider a different snare sound, it didn't quite seem to fit in the mix as well as the other sounds, it sound maybe too sharp and short for a slower track.
llama.exodus
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Posted : Dec 19, 2011 21:35
thx for listening bro!
Yes, 100% right about that snare it doesn't fit at all in that slow bpm. Needs more release for one, yea it's a good intro
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 19, 2011 21:46
nice track, cool vocals. i kind of like the snappy snare drum, why dont you start with the snare you have, then have a mini break and a build and then use a new snare with more release. just an idea.
anyway i think its cool track
llama.exodus
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 00:08
thx for feedback guys, I appreciate it! i made some changes in this part for the better i think.
Added some reverb delay to that snare which is actually a clap xD, changed the hh, worked some more on the buildups and tried to make bassline a bit fatter. Then end still is a bit empty. had to lower master a bit ... peace!
faxinadu
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 06:34
i understand its supposed to be minimalistic because of the genre, but this nice idea of a track could use more story i think.
