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[Downtempo] Fraxi - REM
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fraxi
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Posted : Nov 8, 2013 17:28:03
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knocz
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Posted : Dec 3, 2013 17:10
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Nice flow! Congrats
I think a few details, like little bleeps and sweeps here and there, with a lot of delay and reverb, could place this tune in a whole different space, and giving it a bit more life - but that's my own vision.
Also, did you forget about crashes and other cymbals? You can make more with the whole drum kit, bringing in different rhythms and stuff.
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fraxi
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Posted : Dec 3, 2013 17:40
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You're right about rhytm section. I focused on synths and "story" and I finished this track too early.
After few days I realised that I could made some changes and add much more elements.
Patience is a key, I have to work with this :-D
Thx :-D
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knocz
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Posted : Dec 3, 2013 17:44
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On 2013-12-03 17:40, fraxi wrote:
Patience is a key, I have to work with this :-D
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I believe patience is the key, and silence is gold. But we cant be too patient, or else I would only ever have 1 tune that continuously evolves into all the emotions I want to express.. We must grab the bull by the balls and just try to hold on.
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