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Dn..i think im getting the hang of it now
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Jun 19, 2011 18:06:50
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aciduss
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Posted : Jun 21, 2011 17:18
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Hmmm.. don't like it, bass is like stereo or flanged or something weird, not tight. Percussion is not groovy.
Needs moar dance. thnx. |
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psyraal
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Posted : Jun 21, 2011 18:12
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Man, what sort of intro would that be? 2 shoved samples from sytrus into the tune, that's what i felt bro. I make aciduss's words mine.
https://soundcloud.com/neervos |
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Jun 24, 2011 14:28
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faxinadu
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Posted : Jul 1, 2011 21:34
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Jul 1, 2011 22:25
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Wow .. I realy liket this 'Shofar' At the intro but couldt find any conection to this part later , It was start mistical and then .. (I want this keep and run - The feeling , But not with the same sound because then all is geting boring , This 'Shofar' Have to be here and there (Ze mezayen et ha moach) Try put it in the right places only + Add more atmos and mello pads so this 'Shofar' Not will be the issue of the track but in the background , Then the track will be sound more harmony and free for the listeners , Sure more tools are needed , Look .. To tell you the truth .. The demo you put in here is very short and nothing realy happen in but this sound we have talk about already , So bring more vsts in , Always think grand man , More and more and more .. And what i can put more to complete my story , Ok .. I finish here so what i need now , Be more dramatic in your music . More prec & Hh changes + sound work is need + Right Eq (More high More low - What need , To open the track and to bring and create more illusion of space) mix + Something with the bass too as the gentlemans already said - Maybe try use two bass's when this one in the background , Less Vol , And other , More dominant are taking the first place .
Must say i realy like the intro but and here the big but .. I feel there is an big miss in there when you could add more sounds and let us fly to hell/Heaven (Each one with his place) , But i saw today (Here) that you can get inside to yourself and dream .. Try stay ther longer to pluck the sounds around and bring them with you to here ..
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Icetoon
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Posted : Jul 2, 2011 15:19
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dude... needs EQ for sure. Gonna have to agree about the bass, it sounds soggy. And is it only me or are most of your FX/stabs placed insanely offbeat ? |
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Jul 2, 2011 21:19
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