Plasmorh
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Posted : Feb 4, 2011 02:17
i like the 2nd bass only....
work more
I want a spare brain.... or 2.
harryohm
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Posted : Feb 4, 2011 11:15
hey there !
I am no pro..but...
Try using vb1 one with eq+other low freq enhancing.
or get alien 303 it has presets which more dig'able then your effort here..tweak around till you are happy. and Yes your 2nd one has scope for improvement.
I mostly use VB1 and albino or sometimes vanguard and alien303. doesn't matter what you use...its how u make use of it ....
Spend more time and you should be making which we can diggg !
Best wishes !
Psybro
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Posted : Feb 4, 2011 19:11
Keep at it bro Learning is a way to expand your sonic horizons
knocz
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Posted : Feb 12, 2011 18:11
Hi!
Please try bandpassing your high hats. There are way too many high frequencies colliding with each other. Can you also post one without the hats?
Are you using studio monitors? Probably you are hearing your sounds in a different way..
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Feb 12, 2011 21:08
I dont think you corrected anything, sounds extremely noisy, high freqs eating everything. Actually nothing has a good EQ.. I think no one should attempt producing without monitors, its kinda pointless.
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Flubber
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Posted : Feb 13, 2011 19:14
hi, you guys r right! there r too much highs.
but i think everyone should try to produce even if only on headphones, that s not my case. i burned my old monitors and now have a cheap stereo... for now it s good!
but even here there r too much highs, if i didnt post i probably would continue the error.maybee the problem is with my ears Thx!
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Flubber
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Posted : Feb 13, 2011 20:19
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Posted : Feb 14, 2011 00:18
Hey fluber ..
Liket the tripish sounds up there (Track 2) Can be combined and integrate into and good track (With the right kik and bass and an streaming hh loops , Leads , Fx's and those) Somewere in the backround , But you have to keep working hard to get an real attainment , More effort , Vision and desire , You have to feel the music .. To hear it inside of you before then bring it up to live , To here , Be real and more close . Fix the probs and get an real high sound quality with an right equipment and tools . If you want my answer for what you have write/post in the headline (I like to say what i think , My truth , Hurt or not .. This is the only way to understand and grow up and being better) I didt dig on this bass at all .. Sorry to say ..
So .. Work .. This is the only way to get an good results ..
All the best ..
Insomniscene
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Posted : Feb 15, 2011 14:25
I like the patterns, and the loops are definitely sounding better the further down the page I go, but yeah, keep at it, there is potential there...
Work with the eq more! Listen on a few different sets of speakers and headphones, as well.
Learning is a way to expand your sonic horizons 
