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Demo Track - Space Recordz V.A (july)
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analogic
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Posted : Jan 22, 2003 23:29
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BrainStorm
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Posted : Jan 23, 2003 10:51
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im not into minimal really
(i think its minimal, correct me if im wrong;)
but i have a few things to say:
nice quality, but not amazing 
too repetitive.. monotonous
(especially the same bassline through all the track)
synths should be a bit louder i guess.. and the kickline should change sometimes, no? i mean you have breaks, but the main kicks and hats are the same through all the track
i would add a running hihat..
you know - the faster BPM one 
and few more FX
powerful, but nothing new and extra i can hear
all the same
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biOnic
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Posted : Jan 23, 2003 12:10
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hey brainstorm, nice review, i agree with you on some parts too, but MINIMAL?  ... Tell me where did u see minimal here man, plz... hehehehehehe...
anyway, my friend Ziad, i think ur going in the right way, ur music is getting better everytime... i hv more or less the same opinion as BrainStorm on the synth line, on the FXs and on the fact that the track is too repetitive, but if u work it out a little it'll be just fine
keep it up |
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BrainStorm
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Posted : Jan 23, 2003 13:28
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hey you wanna say its progressive? full on whatever... huh?
if so, man.. wait a few days
i will start posting links to my new album tracks
see what i consider as full on/progressive
what style is it analogic? =)
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analogic
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Posted : Jan 23, 2003 14:45
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thanks for the comments guys...
::yo brainstorm::
bassline: changes 2 times on the track... repetitive?
synths: yeah, need a lot of work... this ones are just to have an ideia to finish the construction of the track..
breaks: there are little breaks.. and a bigger one is coming.. but i know what you wanted to say... kick breaks.. okey..
give me 1 day, to fix some new ideias and we talk again about it?
work work work
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KillerLoop Music - http://www.killerloopmusic.com
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BrainStorm
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Posted : Jan 23, 2003 16:10
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i see and i wish i could hear the final production of yours but i still didnt hear your answer - what style do you put this track in?
i said its closer to minimal, because i can hear something likely to IM
dont be fast man - take your time, there's no any kind of race here
about the bassline - yes, i think 2 times changing through the track is still repetitive
only my personal subjective opinion though
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fonflein
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Posted : Jan 23, 2003 23:55
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congratulations carlos my friend... getting better every day! i am sure you will add lots of surprises and stuff to the track and it will be perfect. amazing work in my opinion.. maybe a different percussion, as BrainStorm said. But, again as he said.. take your time the VA wont come out before the party in may man... so you have plenty of time! Hugs my friend! |
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dayon
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Posted : Jan 31, 2003 14:23
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hey,
A killer track for a killer compilation... its all!!!
work,work,work and work!
hehehehe
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