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panike
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Posted : Sep 24, 2011 15:54:08
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Sep 24, 2011 23:43
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Fullon .. Ok ..
Why this talking pad 50 second ? Pls explain what his contribution/aim .. What he give us except 'Bla bla bla ..' ? (And even without any special effect on) , We both agree this talking has no connection to what around .. He is just in there because you could't find somthing better , So dont be lazy .. We dont want to hear those net samples speechs , We can download them alone if we like , (I dont have to hear your music to hear them) - Maybe i say here some hard things but belive me its for you to get that point . So less otheres , More yours + It have to be fit + Not everywhere - Its taking the all attention from the real thing .. Your music ! . Work on your hh loops - They sound sick , Almost dead . Bass kik combo is nice - Especially for this kind of style (Maybe more power to bass by R bass or X Bass 4000 to bring it be more fat (To the sides) .
Keep the good work ..
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Icetoon
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Posted : Sep 25, 2011 00:04
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Bro, you are bordering on the edge of being rude as opposed to constructive criticism.
Here's some proper criticism :
1) Your percussion sounds a bit dull, perhaps you lowpassed it a bit too much?
2) Also your hit placements are slightly off at some places, try keeping the gaps to a beat or a bar.
3) You're fading much too often, continue a beat with alternating sounds for about 8 bars then introduce a new sound, etc.
4) Try making your own leads, as opposed to using presets. Play around in sylenth and albino if you're looking for effective pitchbending leads. Mess around with modulation envelopes and LFOs (you'll QUICKLY discover new sounds that suit your style of producing).
5) Fill up the empty space with fx and stabs, creaks, groans, zaps or whatever.
6) Layer your leads. Have 2 or more sounds playing simultaneously that greatly compliment each other.
7) Mess around with your percussion loops, don't keep it too linear. Change the pattern every 4th bar or something to change the atmosphere.
^ That is constructive criticism. Other than that, well done bro  And good luck with the track. |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Sep 25, 2011 00:23
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What .. Rude .. ? You sure ?
I dont think so , You think if ill be nice to u and tell you "Oo .. Thats lovely" You think he (Or others) will learn somthing . What is an constructive criticism to tell him what he already know .. To fill this and layer to this ? , Dont be funny .. There is no right/Absolute direct way .. All is open , All is possible .. And i just like to say and point in here on things otheres dont see or write (Think it more important for the creator then tell him to fill here and there , But again here not the place for this discussion) Lets make a deal Icetoon .. You keep and writing your post's and ill keep myn , Will complete the all picture .. And the produceres will get tips X2 .
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panike
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Posted : Sep 25, 2011 02:42
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thanks for your comments guys,dont critize cardinals cartel icetoon,i like how he coments stuff!
cardinals,yeah mate probably your right there is too much voice samples.
What do you mean by dead? low on volume?
icetoon,thanks for the tips too. the leads are from sylenth yeah but not original presets.
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Chimp in Space
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Posted : Sep 25, 2011 08:15
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Thank you for sharing.
I would like to point out the open hats as well as the closed hats have to much reverb. For my taste that is.
This might just be me and a few but how I like to put reverb on my drums is so in isolation I could here some inclination of the reverb but not so I really hear it well. And I don't mix reverb on my cymbals and drums so that in the mix I would hear it or just very little.
This is how I do it. Maybe some blue names could explain this better. I wonder also how they do it. I know Infected and others have reverb so you could hear it in the mix. But the reverb they got cost many falafels for that good sound. And Infected have a very minimal crowd of sounds so they make the sounds they have very massive and in your face and around it hehe.
Sorry for hijacking your thread like that. But I think the reverb tip is a good one for you
Keep up the good work bro
- cheers
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panike
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Posted : Sep 25, 2011 12:23
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Thanks mate,but i think the problem here is probably the whole percursion,because i dont use reverbs in it : /
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In$ane el rato
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Posted : Sep 26, 2011 14:26
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ola!
the prod is not bad at all the only thing i can say it's that this is not really original in the choice of melody and arp on them i ear this kind of lead in a lot of fullon prod but it's only my opinion i love when it's sound different  |
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panike
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Posted : Sep 26, 2011 17:06
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