Oni Katsu
Li/fe
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Posted : Jun 12, 2015 08:00
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0:00-0:55 It'd be nice if you fade the bass in with either reverb and hi-pass, or just a lowpass filter.
I like your stabs from 0:55 - 2:45, but the new synth hitting there is drowning your bass completely, you need to make an EQ dip at 500hz and maybe between 2k and 1khz
Also the drop at 3:40 is pretty neat actually.
Percussion would benefit your track a lot. and i mean a LOT. it's basically just bass and some sounds atm, but the sounds are neat nonetheless.
4:35 i like the glitch sounds a lot, they make a neat atmosphere, but the paddy-synth also needs EQ'ing!
It pasically needs some small touch ups to give it that re-play factor, 4:15, also what you're doing to the bass here isn't necessarely ... bad but the sound is too raw to fit in the mix.
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I said I like it dirty, not muddy. |
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