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deep minimalistic psy 130bpm
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idka
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Posted : Oct 28, 2008 18:33:48
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Kane
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Posted : Oct 29, 2008 05:08
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Wow..I'll try to be as constructive as possible here. Please don't take any offense to this, just trying to help you out.
Other than the first and last sections, I can't even tell if you're using separate bassline notes or if it's just one drone. I suggest turning the decay down or using more of an upbeat rhythm on the bass..at the very least get rid of the long drone sound to it. The mix and your individual tracks need a TON of work. The entire track sounds very flat and straight (no groove or swing). As a whole, it was pretty boring, and I think you need a lot more layering (even for a minimal track). The percussion rhythms sound decent, but the actual sounds need replaced (imo), especially the kick drum..it sounds too realistic and doesn't have any punch to it.
I can definitely see the potential in it, especially if this is your first or one of your first tracks..so keep it up 
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idka
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Posted : Oct 29, 2008 15:11
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para||ax
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Posted : Oct 29, 2008 15:51
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Ah! The minimal mindframe.  I'm enjoying this alot!
Yes, maybe your seperate tracks need some polishing using dynamics. But the droning bass IS the sound as far as I can tell and works well.
Builds and stereo play twisted me up.
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idka
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Posted : Oct 30, 2008 09:06
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