Hey guys, i'd like to share with you this remix of the song "When love takes over" (David Guetta). If you can, tell me your opinion abot it, thx and enjoy!
killik
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Posted : Sep 2, 2012 16:51
now this is...something.
not so much psychedelic in there. in terms of serious critique instead of thinking about whether that fits in here or not id say the track doesnt really have structure. its all over the place.
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Oni Katsu
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Posted : Sep 3, 2012 01:11
Sounds were awesome, but the structure was really weird. Also the climax was anticlimatic.
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Thank you men! You both right about the structure considering the original thack. For this , i made a new version cleaner and a little more linear. I hope that you can also enjoy it. thx!
Listening better I arrived at the conclusion that the first track sounds maybe with much information, but for other hand, i don't see nothing much worse in the structure... actually, it's really a little "contrast" with the original track and in this case it sounds like a progressive trance, so... no problem in to try different structures.
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Sep 16, 2012 12:52
Ok, so i'm hearing this on headphones, and my wife was passing by and asks? Her words:
"What is that shit you're hearing?" Don't be offended, she is a Psychedelic Trance listener, and didn't saw i was at the forum and listening from a wannabe producer point of view.
The track is very well produced, clean, nice kick, but i want to ask you what type of audience you are trying to reach? The woman's voice i've heard so much on the radio that i'm really bored, u could take it off and make something different with it, chopp it or things like that, don't see this working on a psytrance floor, maybe just for a laugh and for 1-2 minutes top.
Put more acid on it This is my view, others may see differently
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L66
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Posted : Sep 17, 2012 14:57
Lol what is this music? commercial dance on a psy forum! the world is nearing an end!
On a more serious note your track is compressed to the shit the dynamics are squashed, leave some breathing space for your mix.
The bass and kick have very exaggerated sub information try some eq or compress to keep under control, the track is almost drowned by all the sub frequencies.
Otherwise a decent track if this is your cup o tea, definitely not my style though not enough happening to keep my interest and very repetitive.
Hey Nomad Moon, i'm recognizing you just now... I used to enjoy a few old tracks yours... When you used to produce Goa.
Thx for your feedback, and about you question it's just for fun and also it can be a provocation. Trance today is always the same indeed, and for other hand, talking about the track, is can be, beyond the fun, an interesting way to show that "small people" can do also interesting things and even better than our "Gods djs" and our "gods producers". This track, as someone said before, is not so psychedelic, but has a little of progressive trance structure that, acording to what a thing, make somehow richer than the most famous.
L66, the world ended a long time ago, actually i'm talking about of what you're saying about the psy... it is always the same, just (Ctrl + C, Ctrl + V) in all aspects. Anybody try to do something really nice, and different, only the same and when someone does this, nice, different, its doesn't matter. For this reason i believe that it gone. The big change today is new people appearing.
I understood what you said about the mix and it was little purposeful. Actually i didn't use nothing especial to check this. This track was made all the time using only a headphone of $ 10, in the onboard. Maybe you can be right about this.
I believe that this track can be considered as trance, for this i posted here, but thx anyway!
Icetoon
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Posted : Sep 18, 2012 07:55
No dude. Maybe trance...but not psychedelic trance.
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Sep 18, 2012 12:47
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On 2012-09-18 06:11, deivsonmarques wrote:
Hey Nomad Moon, i'm recognizing you just now... I used to enjoy a few old tracks yours... When you used to produce Goa.
Hehe! Funny someone who knows me thank u
I agree with u Psytrance is a bit formated but compared with other genres of EDM i still think its one of the more groundbreaking. U cannot capture a psy listener attention if a song only has few sounds, the head must be filled, even some psy-progressive nowadays seem too empty, but always dependes on taste and thats always subjective.
Listen to this one, in my view its very original and fun
