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wizanda
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 7, 2010 13:17:30
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Plasmorh
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 9, 2010 22:40
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different.........
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daark
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Oct 9, 2010 23:27
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i like the kick scratch
overloaded
listen what i've always was lazy doing
make all those channels a volume automation and bring em up and down by turns the way you like it will be a pro track. all sounds pretty nice just maybe some highs in leads are cuttoff too much, either fill this high area or bring the highs back.
work on it 
http://soundcloud.com/magimix-1/chilling-forest-whispers
Wierd shit happens :) |
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minus
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Oct 13, 2010 20:51
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some nice elements bro, and decent flowz,maybe change bass after 2:50, work it more
peace
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loki
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 14, 2010 03:49
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funky and unique! i'd like to hear more, honestly.
Dance, even if you have nowhere to do it but your living room. ~Kurt Vonnegut
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Oct 14, 2010 17:25
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Oct 17, 2010 02:12
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Dont let the mello cover the other sounds , Bass kik should lead the track and mello & atmos in the backround . You need more action in .
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minddoctorsmakeacid
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Oct 19, 2010 22:10
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Im really sorry to say it but sounds confusing and unpleasant... does'nt make scense.
Are you trying to make something new and diferent?
If so it doesn't work just yet.
If not, try to do a track copying you're favourite artist best track or analyze it and you will find out what makes that track work so well, then you will be able to create something with a bit more scense and more audiable.
Sorry if I was to rough on you, last thing I want to do is put you off.
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wizanda
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 20, 2010 16:42
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Its a mind doctoring of my own mind, slowly progressing along design understanding.
Its a step in the direction of experimenting with multiple dynamics. 
Next tunes working on are more stable in terms of melody and dynamics, with just the crucial points that work, yet coming from understanding within the chaos. 
Made a newer copy where the bass and kick lead the track (work in progress), its all a learning process, so all advice helps.
www.wizanda.com www.soundcloud.com/wizanda |
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