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dark psy track...need some opinions!
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carbonic
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 07:02:21
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Hello everybody 
I have a piece of track here, it's a bit old i made it couple of months ago...I meant it to be dark/forrest. I know it has mistakes and stuff but tell me if you like it as a idea!
cheerz and thanks in advance.
link: http://www.sectionz.com/@player.asp?rType=mp3&SZID=28458 |
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Psybro
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 07:12
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I like it, its got great bottom end and dark vibe to it,
older is better sounding i think at least.
I think it should be finished if possible
Cheerz |
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carbonic
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 07:23
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Thanks Psybro. As for the finishing u know how it is you like it then you don't...then you may like it again...But yeah I'll try to finish it.
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Psybro
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 20:53
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Exactly! I have written tracks and liked them after listening to them for a while and then get sick of it.
Good Luck mate |
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ayalien
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Posted : Sep 26, 2009 11:53
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Very nice work, +1. Great evolution, the end is specially beautifull...Shouldn't be hard to finish it, all elements are there! Rytmics are sweet & killer, leads are smooth & lysergic, just let it grow up...Don't go out tonight, roll a good spliff, and send us the final version tomorow!
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Zero-Blade
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Posted : Sep 26, 2009 19:19
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It's a good beginning.
According to my taste a little too empty. Try adding more hihats and some snares and percs. Would be nice also if you add some pads and ambiances here and there. And def more lead melodies.
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carbonic
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Posted : Sep 27, 2009 01:00
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ayalien thnx a lot...not tonight cause I'm hell busy with my studies:S
Zero-Blade that's why I didn't finish it..hehe. Thanks for the critiques!
Peace out! |
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mk47
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Posted : Sep 27, 2009 07:20
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i like it , nice and smooth , good bass , what have u used there ? for the song i think some more percussive bits .. more drums would be nice imo , but u obviously know what ur doing , tc
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carbonic
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Posted : Sep 28, 2009 01:26
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On 2009-09-27 07:20, mk47 wrote:
i like it , nice and smooth , good bass , what have u used there ? for the song i think some more percussive bits .. more drums would be nice imo , but u obviously know what ur doing , tc
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thanks m8...as for the bassline I used alien 303, in the second part of the track I layered two channels with different bass.
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