lahnarrad
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 16:32:48
hey thanks for listening
this is a tune ive been working on for the past week or so, please tell me what you think, tryin to work a few things out, well i hope you enjoy,
thanks again
BooM
Plasmorh
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 23:34
interesting drums and sounds.
I want a spare brain.... or 2.
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 13:11
it s soudin like the dark albums from psycho...
as said above the drums are very interestin...
well tbh the track s very interestin..it just feels the lack of energy..sounds like the synths ( includin the bass ) are hiden i dont know why...as we can see looks like the track s splited in 3 part..the second part and the 3rd part sounds like the synths show up more..in the first part they are hidden...
anyway out of it grats on the work...very cool and diferent... ok it sounds like psycho but psycho albums are unique in the dark sounds from psytrance
lahnarrad
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 21:36
cheers plasmorh and vermee
thanks for the comments and advice,
yeah i was slightly unhappy with that first part myself so i went and changed its up a bit added a few things and make a few improvement
i have put it below and changed the name, please listen and let me what you think?
@vermee
i dont think i have heard psycho do you know where i can find some music? be interestin to hear
boom
Plasmorh
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Posted : Apr 14, 2011 21:40
<3 it ))
more background playing and things comin up and down... panning a lot... lots of atmospheres...
just add things like crazy then arrange them )
I want a spare brain.... or 2.
lahnarrad
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Posted : Apr 15, 2011 17:04
cheers man
do you mean i need more of this or that i got it right?
The Bap
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 00:06
get 'er rid tee big lawd!
Wee bit of EQ would make stuff pop out a bit more Darren, it's all kinda flat is what I guess the guys are trying to say. https://soundcloud.com/craic-addict
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 00:11
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On 2011-04-14 21:40, Plasmorh wrote:
<3 it ))
more background playing and things comin up and down... panning a lot... lots of atmospheres...
just add things like crazy then arrange them )
but don't make those atmos and sounds coming from here and there distracting, the beat should come first to the listeners ears
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blueball
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 01:04
That's cool man! I really like the bassline at the end, nice note choice. Reminds me a bit of Ianuaria.
One possible suggestion - because there is a good amount of melody stuff coming up to the main drop at the end, maybe for some variation the section starting at the drop could be more percussive and less notes on the synths? (bassline melody is cool so it could drive that whole bit!)
It sounds flat to me, like all the percussion and synths sit behind the bassline.
The percussion towards the end of the middle section also starts to feel bland, but maybe there are pieces hidden in the mix I can't hear.
My only other suggestion would be to change up the drone sounds throughout the track, and you will be well on the way with this one.
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lahnarrad
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Posted : Apr 19, 2011 15:11
cheers to everyone for the advice, i have gone back to it know a few times changed and cleaned things up a bit, i will put the new one up soon just wanna sort it out, and get it bucked
cheers again
The Bap
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Posted : Apr 22, 2011 00:22
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