fractal fields
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Posted : Sep 6, 2011 02:34:10
A new scetch, kinda dark feel to it.
Tried to arrange things better, still learnin.
any input for further development?
cheers
fractal fields
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Posted : Sep 6, 2011 23:26
I get bored easy my my work so started a variation on the previous.
hope it gets more input
psyviz
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Posted : Sep 7, 2011 01:26
Hi, there you got some nice sounds man personaly i think the percussion should start from the beginning 46 secs also add something every 9/17 bars to keep it progressive on your second track i love the first one but its missing a few more of those bongos and could have a little more percussion...i think keep the bongos going and it really sounds groovy
Please take my critics as constuctive i really like your tracks and think you are doing very well without them but hopefully they help a little more too ...Best wishes and keep up the good work ....ant
mica
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Posted : Sep 7, 2011 02:03
this is very cool stuff my friend , but I agree with psyviz , put something more in the beginning, and maybe some more pads to fill some void through out the track
aje
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Posted : Sep 7, 2011 12:48
Haha, first I just skipped through the track and thought oh well, seems like a rough sketch and not much happening, but then when you listen to it in full at unfolds a really cool story, I love the vocal samples("We always getting high") and what you have done to them. Kinda like Ketamine-Trance, hehe
Anyways, even though its kinda rough around the edges, it fits with the mood of the track and I don`t think you have to add many more sounds like everyone else said, I like it that way
