fractal fields
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Posted : Oct 25, 2011 23:30:33
A snippet from a day tweeking
need fresh ears,any tips?
thanks
Gedankenexperiment
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Posted : Oct 26, 2011 00:40
yes sounds nice:)...i would ad some percs. when you keep it minimalistic i think you can make some very elaborate (thank you google-translator^^) rythem stuff without getting it overloaded as you have nearly no lead sounds and other mindtwisting noises from hell:) . and i would change the envelope of the bass or just vary it a bit but thats just my taste.
fractal fields
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Posted : Oct 26, 2011 18:06
Thank you Gedankenexperiment, i've put some more sounds in and try to build to a subtile lead...
so..updated...all input welcome
thanks
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Posted : Oct 26, 2011 19:11
I like your music, but with this track i agree with gedanken, abit more perc and sounds would lift it up more.
But its a cool style!.
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Posted : Oct 26, 2011 19:59
fractal fields
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Posted : Oct 27, 2011 17:00
Thanks all for listening and sharing thoughts
I agree that it is still a little to minimalistic, i'll keep working and updating untill its finished.
Also took Cardinal's advice and for working @ a few projects as i get bored easy of my tunes... hope this can keep me fresh and focussed, resulting in a finnished product.
updated
still has some work on perc and a lead (story)
Gedankenexperiment what would you change on the bas envelopes?
thanks again!
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Posted : Oct 27, 2011 17:29
fractal fields
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Posted : Oct 28, 2011 20:09
Thanks Faxinadu, i've changed the bass quite a lot(patterns & processing)
Does it sounds better this way?
Nice to have other minds and ears participating, thanks
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Posted : Nov 9, 2011 23:46
updated
dunno tell me
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Posted : Nov 11, 2011 16:14
nice sounds brew,,u have nice sounds to make a real nice minimalistik track out of this,, first i think u breaking too much,,, instead of breaks after every small buildup,, i think u should progressively keep building the sounds, by adding more and more layers instead of breaking the flow,, and snare kinda sound at 2:35,, is out of place, fuks up the flow,, u should ffind more percussive elements and keep building, adding some atmospherics like at 5:15,, maybe u can itroduce those sounds earlier, and keep building,, maybe just 1 long break in middle, or 2, depends on ur taste, but a more progressive buliding thing should go in here accordin to ma ears, rest sounds real nice, keep at it.
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Posted : Nov 11, 2011 23:46
thx minus,
thats kinda problem for me indeed, getting a nice flow and story into my tracks
anyway worked some more on perc
less breaks helps indeed still looking for a driving lead kind of thing...
thanks
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Posted : Nov 16, 2011 23:47
great stuff,reminded me the old minimal tunes!fuck hats,add weirdness .ok ,some hats also!
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