carbonic
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Posted : Oct 8, 2009 15:40:46
Hello everybody. Here's a demo of my new track. It's almost finished but i want it to expand a little bit more. Didn't work much on details. Tell me what you think if possible.
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Shamzi
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Posted : Oct 8, 2009 16:22
Nice arrangement.
Is that a nordlead?
You need to fix the bass imo.
It sounds weak.
I like everything but the bass, interesting sound and good arr as mentioned.
Sound better than most dark these days.
Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 8, 2009 18:57
Hey carbonic! sounds good, ill give you a better review later, gonna work some on a track now...
keep it up
carbonic
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Posted : Oct 9, 2009 14:01
thanx guys. For the leads I used mostly albino 2, 3 and Vanguard.
Anyone else?
Mahruna
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Posted : Oct 9, 2009 15:08
Nice strong bass coll leads , but the version is to short i want hear more.
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carbonic
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Posted : Oct 10, 2009 14:21
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On 2009-10-09 15:08, Mahruna wrote:
Nice strong bass coll leads , but the version is to short i want hear more.
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Yeah it's just a demo, I need to fix some stuff but currently I'm not finding the time, but yeah for sure I'll post in this thread when everything is how I want.
Thanks for commenting
Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 11, 2009 17:09
Hey carbonic!
I really like this one! its heavy and i like the reverb depth!
Maybe you could add some harmony to it, some pad or lead in one section... or some kind of hook(comic or serious).. or just a break with a melodic segment, i dont know but i could work... i hope you get my drift!
could be a descending kind of melody...
or you just skip any kind of melody but add some more whackyness with timestretched sounds..
Otherwise i think its a nice job done and you should keep at it...
cheers
CH3CKM8
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Posted : Oct 12, 2009 18:29
Hey man, 3 years ago i only listened to dark psy trance, now im not into anymore, im now a prog lover. Anyways, ur track is awesome, it reminds me of baphomet, kerosene club... very nice since work and baseline, i would try to put some high frequency synth drums, i think it fits. c ya
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Posted : Oct 14, 2009 02:28
sweet dude ^^. this is the kind of music i like
carbonic
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Posted : Oct 14, 2009 11:20
Freflow the timestretched sounds idea sounds nice. Gonna work on it soon will try to put some more mystic stuff CH3CKM8 I'm into prog too, sometimes I produce prog sometimes twisted stuff.
wOlfis glad to hear that Thanks
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Posted : Oct 17, 2009 22:14
ok m8 nice vibes
nite time psychedelic iz ur style keep up excellent work!!!!!looking 4ward 4 ur realese!!! best regardz from corfu greece
