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D-Sect - Technicism (psy trance)
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Daniel Eng
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 17, 2009 21:58:51
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Daniel Eng
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 20, 2009 19:20
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shellbound
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 20, 2009 22:59
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i like this a lot. i don't really have any constructive criticism for you. everything is done very nicely. production is good. the vibe is good. the structure works. perhaps you could've done the breakdown a little bit more interesting. i'm just taking about the part around the 3 minute mark when you start stripping out elements. it certainly works, but it's kind of typical. you build it back up very nicely after that. so it's not like that part is weak in itself, it's just weaker compared to the quality of the rest of the track. other than that, it's very good all around.
very nice work, man.
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Daniel Eng
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 21, 2009 22:24
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On 2009-11-20 22:59, septa wrote:
i like this a lot. i don't really have any constructive criticism for you. everything is done very nicely. production is good. the vibe is good. the structure works. perhaps you could've done the breakdown a little bit more interesting. i'm just taking about the part around the 3 minute mark when you start stripping out elements. it certainly works, but it's kind of typical. you build it back up very nicely after that. so it's not like that part is weak in itself, it's just weaker compared to the quality of the rest of the track. other than that, it's very good all around.
very nice work, man.
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Thank you very much Sir!
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