alajarvela
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Posted : Dec 31, 2010 17:03
Can you put it up on SoundCloud, I'm listening to it now, but I'd prefer to look at tracks when they have a waveform so that I can focus on certain parts of the tracks also visually, now I gotta stay sharp the whole time listening to this
Daniel Eng
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Posted : Dec 31, 2010 18:33
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On 2010-12-31 17:03, alajarvela wrote:
Can you put it up on SoundCloud, I'm listening to it now, but I'd prefer to look at tracks when they have a waveform so that I can focus on certain parts of the tracks also visually, now I gotta stay sharp the whole time listening to this
Freeflow
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Posted : Jan 2, 2011 05:12
alajarvela - isnt staying sharp what its all about hehe
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Posted : Jan 2, 2011 05:25
Daniel det här låter fett!
I really like it what a sweet drive you got going!
You managed to keep the flow going for all these minutes,
Get your track released! And if you want to do a live collaboration some day just give me a PM
But sure there are somethings one could give constructive critics about, but right now i just want to enjoy the music. maybe later i will.
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Posted : Jan 2, 2011 16:19
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On 2011-01-02 05:25, Freeflow wrote:
Daniel det här låter fett!
I really like it what a sweet drive you got going!
You managed to keep the flow going for all these minutes,
Get your track released! And if you want to do a live collaboration some day just give me a PM
But sure there are somethings one could give constructive critics about, but right now i just want to enjoy the music. maybe later i will.
wiseNevil
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Posted : Jan 4, 2011 10:18
nice man
i like the drum kit
at 2:08 i'd change the rolling bassline to something cleaner.
at 2:34 when that sound comes in, it stops after 5 notes, and then after a while it being completed, i'd start at in the break as a full part and make smaller break, i think it'll be more powerful.
Daniel Eng
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Posted : Jan 5, 2011 11:57
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On 2011-01-04 10:18, wiseNevil wrote:
nice man
i like the drum kit
at 2:08 i'd change the rolling bassline to something cleaner.
at 2:34 when that sound comes in, it stops after 5 notes, and then after a while it being completed, i'd start at in the break as a full part and make smaller break, i think it'll be more powerful.
4:44- very kewl.
the end is a bit smeared.
overall- very nice track, gj.
Thank you so much. I agree with the bassline part.. What do you mean with "the end is a bit smeared?
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Posted : Jan 5, 2011 15:54
that means that imo it needs more work
i'd make it more dynamic, bigger changes... it reminds some parts from the rest of the track
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Daniel Eng
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 14:44
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On 2011-01-05 15:54, wiseNevil wrote:
that means that imo it needs more work
i'd make it more dynamic, bigger changes... it reminds some parts from the rest of the track
hehe
what a sweet drive you got going!
