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cunning plan?
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apsilum
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Posted : Sep 22, 2002 13:06
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I've worked hard this weekend on some of my tracks... the result is a completely new sound for me, yay.
Gentlemen I give you: "Cunning Plan", or not so cunning as its not quite finished yet - I've encountered an enormouse writer's block over the last month or so 
Please, pretty please, can I get some community help on this, any comments are much appreciated.
The track fades out just after 4 min, gulp - but the general idea is there.
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username: sonik@global.co.za
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hoomongoose respect.
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Jason (LyTe)
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Posted : Sep 22, 2002 16:50
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No such track there...
 "We Do Not Allways See Things As They Are. We See Things As We Are" -Ancient Chinese Proverb
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apsilum
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Posted : Sep 22, 2002 20:07
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Jason (LyTe)
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Posted : Sep 23, 2002 00:42
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Much Improved Boet, Much Improved. Your Sound work Keeps getting better and better. i dig that cool opening. your bass needs some more beef on it though, it's too skinny to matter. Balance things up some more to get a perfect setup - not all the sounds Pan and turbulate correctly - check that up.
Structure wise, not really my Cup of JeggerMeister, but it's a nice, diggish tune, can work rather well at night, with those Quirky, twisted sounds you got there. work on those breaks man, make me shout yassirs man 
All in all - very good work, still needs some tinkering though. finish that tune up, wrap it up nicely and send it off to a lable or somthing 
"We Do Not Allways See Things As They Are. We See Things As We Are" -Ancient Chinese Proverb
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Kaz
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Posted : Sep 23, 2002 13:20
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Jason (LyTe)
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Posted : Sep 23, 2002 14:59
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i think it was star wars' R2D2 as well in there
"We Do Not Allways See Things As They Are. We See Things As We Are" -Ancient Chinese Proverb
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apsilum
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Posted : Sep 23, 2002 15:10
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Thanx guys!!! I will definately work on that bassline, maybe a little reverb or something. You guys have just made my day!!!
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Jason (LyTe)
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Posted : Sep 23, 2002 15:18
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eq it, compress it and add a bass boost apsi
"We Do Not Allways See Things As They Are. We See Things As We Are" -Ancient Chinese Proverb
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apsilum
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Posted : Sep 24, 2002 17:21
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Thanx Jason, tried some reverb - made everything too murky. What I have done is right after that 4:30 of track is that I've broken it down into a reasonably long break with some twisted psychadelic sounds popping out of nowhere which then slap you back into the original bassline. It seems to work, I'll keep you guys posted. It's not R2D2, I think its one of those phaser guns being programmed or something, did you catch the horse?!
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Reece
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Posted : Sep 25, 2002 02:23
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nice work my friend! (i found the horse, hehe  )
agree with most of the comments here,
only thing i thought was perhaps the percussion work could use a little more 'spice'?
anyhows, great track, u have heaps of potential man, and im following your progression with keen interest
keep up the great work!
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ApsyDrop
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Posted : Sep 25, 2002 11:25
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Maybe I should have a listen to this track...
seems to be sparking a lot of attention.........
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