llama.exodus
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 14:32:13
I'm on holidays so I got a lot of free time on my hands = ) Just finished off this track, I think I finished at least.
What I'm looking for is any kind of feedback technical or music wise if possible. I always learn useful stuff from this community. Thanks!
Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 13, 2012 12:55
Wise way to spend your holiday .
You could introduce it a little bit more gentle, now its not really an intro.
Very wierd and psychedelic with that sample at 30 second .
Awesome delayed sounds there.
Nice melody also.
at 1:30 a sound/sample comes in, it sounds like its a harmonic error there.
I like the percussions, but you could bring them up abit louder.
The arrangement seem a little random in the percs at 2.30.
I would add another percussion to bind them more togheter.
I feel you could smoothen the leading up to the break at 4.20. You could make that break a little bit longer also, to really build up excitment and create more drive.
Some variation in the percussions in the end part would be nice.
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Apr 14, 2012 00:36
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On 2012-04-12 14:32:13, llama.exodus wrote:
Just finished this track
Your track is 50% empty , Theres nice ideas here and there but not realy much happen in .
Read carefully waht Grevinsky wrote you , Add atoms , Leads and loops , Bring some living in , Bass note chance's , Some different rhythm's , More melody's .
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On 2012-04-12 14:32:13, llama.exodus wrote:
I'm on holidays
Work .. !
knocz
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Posted : Apr 14, 2012 16:04
Just to add on what was already said, the kick is lacking a bit of high end.. try fixing that and it will sound a lot better.
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Apr 16, 2012 15:53
Thanks much for feedback guys!!
I guess I needed some opinions before going on, now that I listen to this track again I agree it's 50% complete. Kinda turns off at the middle. Some high end on kick is a good idea.
I'm all fresh after a weekend of listening other sounds!! Gonna get my ass back to work.
Peace and have a great week!
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