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PsyOp


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Posted : Aug 28, 2005 19:45
A new track Im working on. Let me know what you think. http://s49.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=05PYC6HC2ZZ1F0ROZ5S0239WIC

This track, Do you play was written in fruity loops V4.5, with Absynth and vanguard vst's. I used prosect for kick and hats and thanks to http://www.dorumalaia.com/freerefillswavsamples.htm
for all the fx.

All feedback will be greatly appreciated.
FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posted : Aug 30, 2005 09:16
intro sounds evil.... before the word shall theres a pop that should be removed your kick and bass sounds are great i like the style its progressive but dark also.... about a third of the the way through and theres a break that sounds kinda rough i dont care for the weeeeeeooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww sound going through it before the main break vocal samples are good break maybe a little empty try some ambience in the background and after it comes in its still a little empty. ok back to the beginning good sound just needs a little more try some long sounds that sew it all together youve got a good basis it just needs more try tobuild up the energy level after the main break however you see fit

itd be cool if you could review mine the post is the one that says war of monkeys

keep at it

-facehead-

p.s. thanks for the link
PsyOp


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Posted : Aug 30, 2005 22:11
Thanks. I was feeling it was a bit empty. As for the click on the second vocal. This is just a beta mix. I like to lay the foundation as the juices are flowing. As for evil that was the theme. I imagine scenario's when Im composing. The scenario was like a race against time with an omni present enemy, chasing someone.
psybratt
Devic

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Posted : Aug 31, 2005 03:49
psyop

good intro .. i like it .. good sounds .. the sound at 2:28 .. too harsh .. does not go well with the track .. do something about it .. detune it, flange it, soften it or something .. at about 3:02min, you add anoher synth sound .. needs to sound more dark .. (maybe add distortion!?) .. this sound has great potential .. needs to be more dark to go with the overall theme of the track ..

at 4mins, you have a small period without beats .. i would have added some fx to fill in the space ..

that is one good bassline at 06:15min .. i like it ..

the ending seemed a bit abrupt .. but overall, good job dude .. keep at it .. =)

cheers,
Devic
PsyOp


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Posted : Aug 31, 2005 23:10
Hey thanks for the words psybratt The ending hadnt been made at the point of that link. its up to 9:01 atm. After mastering I will put a link here for the track.
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