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critique needed

amir987


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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 08:51:29
constructive critique needed
I'm begginer, I know it sounds bad, but I need advice with making sounds clearer.
thanks in advance



Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 12, 2012 12:23
Hello amir987.
Use the workshop area for critic and feedback.

About the song.
It sounds very goa like .
And it does not sound bad.

You could make the base more clearer and punchy. I would fatten up the clap also.
You could work a little bit more on the progression as well, perhaps progress the melody abit further.

But its a very short piece you display so its kind of hard to say.           .
http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species
knocz
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Posted : Apr 14, 2012 16:12
It sounds as it sounds, but don't loose focus and try to get it perfect, just move on!

You've got a nice sounding section, bringing a certain vibe and context and ambient, not take it somewhere and make something different.

At the end, a nice beat drop with one of those sounds delayed with really high feedback (a tape delay with some automation on the time would sound wicked), and bring in a K-bbK-bbK-bbK-bb in a galloping style           Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz
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