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Critique my work

viklord


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Posted : May 23, 2011 17:13:55




I want to do something to give the bass some more depth, but i'm not really sure what...

Also, I want... hehehehehehehe... percussion help?
minus
IsraTrance Full Member

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Posted : Jun 2, 2011 12:42
yea well u cant hear the bass at all, i had to increase vol jus to hear , u can mix this mix a little hotter for sure, and try wetting some of ur percussion layers with some fx like flanger+delay etc,, and layer on top of percussion layer to get more intense perc work
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aciduss
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Posted : Jun 2, 2011 17:41
Learn more. Work more on it.
This doesn't even sound like trance. Sorry.
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ProtoDrive

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Posted : Jun 2, 2011 19:38
*WTH with that intro? o_O
* Fade in @0:33 its tooooo loud and everything else is toooo low, you can even notice that in the waveform.
* Kick and bass sounds terrible and that melody sounds even worse.
* Again fade in @1:06 WTF?
* @2:49 that sound eats the whole mix.

I might sound agressive but this track is just wrong in many ways. I guess you are trying to make Psy-Trance but it looks like you have never listened to this music or perhaps you are deaf.
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Anyer
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Posted : Jun 3, 2011 09:45
Quote:

On 2011-06-02 19:38, ProtoDrive wrote:
*WTH with that intro? o_O
* Fade in @0:33 its tooooo loud and everything else is toooo low, you can even notice that in the waveform.
* Kick and bass sounds terrible and that melody sounds even worse.
* Again fade in @1:06 WTF?
* @2:49 that sound eats the whole mix.

I might sound agressive but this track is just wrong in many ways. I guess you are trying to make Psy-Trance but it looks like you have never listened to this music or perhaps you are deaf.






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IsraTrance Full Member

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Posted : Jun 3, 2011 10:25
lol if it s not to be taken serious i liked it...

fuckin trippy ... subliminar msgs lol but ye, practice practice practice           
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