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Icetoon
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Posted : Jun 29, 2011 15:35:30
Hey guys i'm pretty new to the production scene... i've only made 1 psy track (been doing it for about 1 month now) and I would like some criticism on my work before i continue.

here's the little 30 second clip of my work



Grevinsky
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Posted : Jun 30, 2011 19:37
Its very hard to say anything on a 30 second clip. Is this the begining of the track?,
There is something strange with the base every now and then.
Kick and base could come up louder, u could also make the base abit more drive in.
compress the percussions so you can hear them also.
The lead is okay tho.           .
http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species
Icetoon
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Jun 30, 2011 21:46
thanks for the feedback mate. I'll try what you recommended.

faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht

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Posted : Jul 1, 2011 05:37
good ideas keep going           
The Way Back
https://faxinadu.bandcamp.com/album/the-way-back
Icetoon
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Jul 1, 2011 08:52
Thanks man. in progress
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