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Could You please Feedback on my Psy-Progressive track

-=atman=-
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Posted : Feb 17, 2004 00:54
Could you please leave a feedback on this psy-pro track? Thanx and biggest respect 2 all composers

http://aftermoth.pochta.ru/DERB_MSRD.mp3           ---=
atman
Te_nTe
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Posted : Feb 17, 2004 16:55
very good effects/pads. perfect work.
your kick and bass are not heard enough comparing to effs/pads.
also the groove level is not loud enough.
as it seems to me your effects are coming from a good vsti's or samples , but the bass kick and percussion are not heard at all.
all you need is work on sound.the construction is pretty ok.i would add more effecs to make it more interesting - if to look overall you use pretty same effects and pads the whole track , try to make more dialogs and lead the track story to something.
keep up.
Qualium


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Posted : Feb 17, 2004 19:04
The basic sound is good, Atman, you've got a decent sounding groove going, but it doesn't vary much. At the moment it's sounds like basically the same few parts dropped in and out. Parts can get stale pretty quickly when we hear them too much, particularly if they are of the more in-your-face kind.

I feel that there needs to be a bit more overall form to the track, more structure. As Te_nTe said, dialogs (or dialogues as we say here in Oz) and leading the track to something.
-=atman=-
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Posted : Feb 17, 2004 19:48
Thank you thanks a lot, i'll be working on dialogs and variaty, a'll try to underline the groove, and work on the structure. should i compress the perc a bit more? Thank you soooo much for your wise comments and tips!
With biggest respect
Te_nTe
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Posted : Feb 18, 2004 08:08
dont compress the perc at all except claps and snares.
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